As much as I was hoping for more from Tes, the premise of the story pretty much turns me off, sorry to say. Since she's such a good writer I decided to give it a chance and overflew the two chapters. I will continue to do so until I either get hooked on the story or see that it's really not for me.
About the title, lol, my reaction was close to Mikaela's. I typed Allegheny into my didtionary even before I clicked the link, but nothing came up
. Thankfully she added a pic in her journal, so with one click to the story it became clear.