Wow, Amanda! You are really making up for lost time tonight! If you'd taken TWO days off, there'd be no keeping up. There are a lot of great observations here.
I noticed too how often Ennis uses the pronoun "we" during the Brokeback summer. As in "what are we supposed to do now..." and "what if we need to work for him again..."
Good one!
The moments when we are too far away from the boys to hear what they're saying... or the abrupt cuts away from scenes of their interactions in later camping trips... and even our difficulty in understanding their whispers in TS2, I think are all meant to make us feel like intruders. That, even if we're benevolent and happy for them, we're still intruding on something "private and precious"
I like this. That does go a long way toward explaining why so much of their dialogue and other stuff is hard to hear or far away ("look what I brought") or even (as in the hand-holding) hard to see. One example of this that always gets me is during the hailstorm. First, you can barely hear what they're saying. Then they take the opportunity to go into the tent together. And instead of letting us join them in there, they close up the tent flaps, as if it's their own private business.
It's another explanation, along with the "never enough time" theme, for Lee not letting us see many of their private affectionate moments. Again, though, I would say he may have gone a bit overboard ...
Even on Brokeback when he's in the tent whittling during the rain storm we see him look out the tent opening as a stand-in for a window.
Right! I'd never thought about that one before, but add it to the list.
He's probably always sort of looking for Jack out those windows... or at least daydreaming.
Whenever he thinks about Jack his eyes sort of automatically drift to whatever windowish thing there is available (outside the tent, off into the distance when he's spreading tar, etc.). The only exception I can think of is in the bedroom scene with Alma. There, his wistful gaze off to his right and the howl of wind have to stand in for a window.
Hey! When he thinks of Jack, he looks around for a ... WINDow!