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Offline tforster

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Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« on: September 12, 2009, 10:49:00 pm »
I'm not sure if this has been done yet... sorry if it's not an original idea for the group...

Brokeback Haiku
Just remember... first line = five syllables, 2nd = 7, 3rd = 5

Here's mine:

cowboys on mountain
love is a force of nature
descend to heartbreak
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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2009, 11:44:12 pm »
I think there are some haiku posted in various areas like in Fan Fiction or Creative Writing, but this is a good idea.  I'll try to work something up!  Thanks for starting this thread!

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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2009, 02:10:41 am »
on the mountainside
Junes full moon lights a puptent
two ranch hands entwined
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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #3 on: September 13, 2009, 06:31:39 am »
blue wyoming sky
shy cowboy looks up to meet
blue wyoming eyes
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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2009, 10:17:13 pm »
Oh, retropian... you are good!


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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #5 on: September 14, 2009, 02:19:34 am »
Quote from: tforster on September 13, 2009, 10:17:13 pm
Oh, retropian... you are good!




Gee, thanks. :)

come, climb the mountain
come, live the sweet life with me
how could you say no?
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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #6 on: October 19, 2009, 03:55:45 pm »

just for a moment
he sends up a prayer of thanks
it rides on the wind
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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #7 on: October 19, 2009, 03:58:27 pm »
Quote from: retropian on September 13, 2009, 06:31:39 am
blue wyoming sky
shy cowboy looks up to meet
blue wyoming eyes

OMG, Ian, that is awesome.
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Re: Post Your Brokeback Haiku Here
« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2009, 09:02:55 am »
Quote from: southendmd on October 19, 2009, 03:58:27 pm
OMG, Ian, that is awesome.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. ;D
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