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Offline gwyllion

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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #10 on: October 21, 2009, 04:32:55 pm »
Oh my goodness, I was wondering where you'd been,
Glad you weren't Stranded, like that time when,
Jack was caught in a storm,
But Ennis's hands were warm,
Did Jack on the massage table, and in his hotel room again!

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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #11 on: October 21, 2009, 04:42:22 pm »
Welcome Donna!!!   :-*  ;)



The next morning Jack said with a frown
"I think we can go for a ride, the wind has slowed down"
They went up to the sheep, they were all tangled and mixed
Took them quite a while to get it all fixed
Little did they know how soon they'd be back in town


« Last Edit: October 23, 2009, 04:16:58 pm by Sason »

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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #12 on: October 21, 2009, 06:24:10 pm »
What a great idea, Sonja!   :D  And these are some terrific "ficmericks!"

Okay, now I have to put my thinking cap on ..........
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #13 on: October 21, 2009, 06:40:15 pm »
They didn’t realize they were In Plain Sight
Their only cover was the dark of night
While they romped in the sun
They were observed by one
Who was unsympathetic to their plight



The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #14 on: October 21, 2009, 10:00:01 pm »
Way to go, mariez!

That Bus Stop gang is so full of angst,
Ennis can't keep Jack's hands out of his pants,
Lureen's bun in the oven?
And Alma's lack of lovin'?
I should have deleted this fic and drank!

(Not really bcatjr!  ;D)
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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #15 on: October 22, 2009, 02:05:21 am »
 :laugh:

GREAT ficmericks!


Do you take requests?  :)

How about one with Going Home? I'm rereading that one at the moment on my brand new e-reader.
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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #16 on: October 22, 2009, 08:10:49 am »
Sure!

Where trunks are called boots, and a hood is a bonnet,
If it's far from Wyomin', Going Home is on it,
In the gloomy British Isles
The boys wear only smiles,
If you want something better, you should have asked for a sonnet!

Oh, that was really bad... :laugh:
 
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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #17 on: October 22, 2009, 08:28:23 am »
Wow!
Very good!  :)

Thanks.   :D
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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #18 on: October 22, 2009, 01:35:31 pm »
Welcome Mariez and belbbmfan!!

I'm glad you like the ficmericks!    ;)


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Re: Brokeback Ficmericks!
« Reply #19 on: October 22, 2009, 01:49:30 pm »
Yet another try with Going Home:


"I'm going home to help my dad", said Jack as they parted
Both of them felt the opposite to lighthearted
They went each to their own
Ennis puked with a moan
The contents of their hearts uncharted

« Last Edit: October 23, 2009, 04:17:21 pm by Sason »

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