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Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« on: August 13, 2006, 07:09:39 pm »
Daydream

I am waiting to give
am arcxhitecture tour, when
the Curator of Chinese Art,
a mean man with lovely blue eyes,
who hated teaching us Chinese art
walks up to me and asks:

"Julie, what turns the leaves red
in the fall?" Just like that.  "Oh, Dr. Knight,
that's very simple. You've seen the ceiling
of the Sistine Chapel?--where God touches
Adam's index finger with his?"
"Yes," he answers.
"Well, it's sort of like that. "For the first tree,
God comes down, swoops down,
from heaven, with several cherubim, and--
three of the cherubim take a photograph of it--
touches the first deciduouis tree,
with his index finger, and it turns all
red and golden.
He is very large, larger than the tree, larger than
a nearby church steeple, and wears
a voluminous white robe, and looks
supremely confident, and sort of amused.
And--that's it!"

"Thank you. That's what I thought, but I wasn't sure,"
he says, and walks away, smiling.
« Last Edit: August 15, 2006, 09:52:46 pm by twistedude »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2006, 12:57:48 pm »
C'mon guys, you've written better poetry than THAT...
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2006, 03:00:28 pm »
Swiftly, swiftly
I pen meagre verse
Celebrating my joy and heartache
In being here
Among absent friends
Bound by invisible desire
For two shades
Of cowboys lost
On the vast open space
Of the darkening frontier.

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Re: Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2006, 09:14:49 pm »
The possibly not at all erotic adventures of Abraham Lincoln and Joshua Fry Speed. But...don't count on it.

 For four fuckin' years?

A young man named Joshua Fry Speed
shared his bed with Abe Lincoln, in need
for four years they slept warm
and came to no harm
it's a wonder that they didn't breed!
« Last Edit: August 16, 2006, 06:19:29 pm by twistedude »
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Re: Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2006, 05:19:48 pm »
More Lincoln and Speed: departure, origins and the war.

Speed's desertion left L bereft,
(who knows if his heart had been cleft?)
L was moved to confess
in a fragile P.S.:
"I have been quite a man since you left."

Josh Speed is Kentucky born, craves
nothing, for he has it in spades
his fortune's immense
in dollars and cents,
a plantation that's crawling with slaves. 
 
L's from Kentucky too; friend,
he's so poor, we can't comprehend,
no school and few folks
but plenty of jokes
a mind gifted and sad to the end.

Speed naturally wished Lincoln well
but said he would see him in hell
E'er he shove overboard
what Lincoln abhorred
A nation half-slave and half-well.

But, pining at home, Speed thought that
he'd see Lincoln's Sherman--a chat--
Sherman ordered the fate
of the troops in his state
and Kentucky was proving a rat.

 "General Sherman, Sir,what do you need?"
'Everything!" said Sherman to Speed,
"rifles, horses, cash, food,
men who lead and don't brood--
I've asked Lincoln five times, yes, indeed!"

"Write it down, General, Sir,  if you please!:"
Sherman wrote, and Speed  left like a breeze
and returned in a week
with all Sherman did seek
as if all had been done with great ease.
.
"I'm a general, commanding the West,
You 're  a private citizen, at best:
In four days, you have got
what I couldn't have, shot
and dying for food, and the rest!"

"You'd best take my command status here
I'll go home, plant  trees and drink beer
Your word's clearly worth more
than my pleas at his door--
Can you make this a little more clear?"

Speed smiled, and said " I do score,"
(as he left the tent by the flap door)
Because Lincoln's my friend
and will be till the end--
Your mistake was not asking for more."

Ever try writing Civil War histiry in limricks--it's a bitch and a half!
« Last Edit: August 16, 2006, 07:43:36 pm by twistedude »
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Re: Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2006, 05:32:14 pm »
Why all the tears?
Don't you know, friend,
That death is just a change in perspective--
A slight shift in the well-worn path
That you and I shared so often, so freely?

If only you knew,
If only I could reach you
To tell you how near
I really am
As close, if not closer
Than your own beating heart

Then your tears would dry up
On the wind
Blowing westerly
Towards the green mountain
Towards our once and future home.

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"Trust the Man"? No...more crap by Julie...
« Reply #6 on: August 23, 2006, 12:18:52 am »
brothers and sisters:

In 1955, a guy in my college class did a dance on a stage, 375 feet away from me. It inspired me to write the following poem, which I published in the college literary magazaine.  I probably should have realized that if he had that effect on me at 375 feet, I should probably check him out pretty carefully before I observed him...up close. I didn't.

(untitled)--1955

Masaculinity is rather innate
For the lightness of your step
and the grace of your hands
relavent, undeceiving,
leave one to ponder (not quite mentally)
the motive of your motion.

In 1957, when we were seniors, he took me up on my "invitation.'  It waren't no fun. It was HELL. I forgot how to read. I had to go to summerschool for 3 months to make up all the classes I flunked. I had no sex life for 3 years.
However, his sister  came to the college, that year, as a freshman. This is a poem I wrote for her ( I never showed it to her, never published it anywhere):

Weezie Poem--1957

Somewhat earlier than 18 years ago,
before your ancestors carved bison on bone in the caves at Marsulas,
they left their lower jaws and teeth for archeologists to scratch their heads over,
comparing these to bones of those who swang through trees,
whose fathers slunk along the ground, after crawling out of the sea

When nothing moved on the earth, under the sky
and you were only a Gleam in your Father's Eye.


So this afternoon, having seen "Trust the Man!" with a friend, and realizing to my surprise that Maggie Gyllenhaal didn't turn me on at ALL--though I think she's very pretty, and a fine actreess, and enjoyed the movie--Julianne Moore and David Duchovny were great, too)-I wrote a poem about--all that waste, so many years ago:

Yellow Bird of Early Spring---this afternoon

Weezie was as fair
as her brother was dark. blue
eyed, while his were brown,

blond,  while his hair was
black, short-lashed, while his were long,
curling. He wore glasses,

while she was sharp-eyed.
She was sweet and loving, while
he was a bastard.

Trifling differences
like these aside, they were, of
course, identical.

But he was a boy,
she, a girl. I hadn't the
foggiest notion

what to do about that.
« Last Edit: August 25, 2006, 12:50:30 am by twistedude »
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Self-made poems of brokeback (non-haiku)
« Reply #7 on: September 05, 2006, 08:46:01 pm »
Soft, honeyed words fell strangely on his ears
Gentle touch, tender glances, stranger still
Brute penury of heart fired his fears
This blighted birthright his love sought to kill
Can the withered limb, dry, find new green dress?
Does the hoary meadow welcome new life?
A wooden paddle, meager shirts to press
Beats time to fresh change, though not without strife
The heart has its secrets, truth its reward
The sweet slick of spit helps drive its point home
Trails just beginning, dark rivers to ford
Seeking shelter under heaven's far dome
Love has enmeshed them, Fate loses the key
Servile to bliss, they would loathe to be free.