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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #20 on: December 29, 2006, 10:17:40 pm »
Yay! Thanks for updating... I'm rushing off to read  :D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #21 on: December 31, 2006, 11:00:35 am »
I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/79199.html#cutid1

Chapter Ten: The Long and Winding Road
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx and the fine actors that portrayed them on screen.
My profound thanks to Jean.
A/N: Again, we’re jumping ahead a year in time, but the events leading up to the meeting will surface in good time
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If today was not an endless highway,
If tonight was not a crooked trail,
If tomorrow wasn't such a long time,
Then lonesome would mean nothing to you at all.

Bob Dylan “Tomorrow is a Long Time”

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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #22 on: December 31, 2006, 11:54:45 am »
I really loved this chapter Bailey. When Danny saw the "mystery man" I about died. And I loved the confrontation between Jack and Ennis. It was very real and very intense. And, though it was hard to read, I think that Jack did the right thing and I'm glad he's finally standing up for himself in whatever way he can. I really think he's gained some strength in the last two chapters.

Thanks for this  :-*
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #23 on: December 31, 2006, 12:30:37 pm »
I really loved this chapter Bailey. When Danny saw the "mystery man" I about died. And I loved the confrontation between Jack and Ennis. It was very real and very intense. And, though it was hard to read, I think that Jack did the right thing and I'm glad he's finally standing up for himself in whatever way he can. I really think he's gained some strength in the last two chapters.

Thanks for this  :-*

Thank you.  I've been dying to write this chapter ever since chapter three.  Their paths have finally crossed, but they still have a lot of hard miles ahead of them.  Neither is taking full responsibility for his actions yet.  Glad you're still enjoying the ride.

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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #24 on: January 01, 2007, 03:52:41 pm »
I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/79471.html

Chapter Eleven: I Will Lay Me Down
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx and the fine actors that portrayed them on screen.
My profound thanks to Jean.
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When you need a friend
I'm sailing right behind
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will ease your mind
Paul Simon “Bridge Over Troubled Water”
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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #25 on: January 02, 2007, 06:48:53 pm »
I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/79621.html#cutid1

Chapter Twelve: A Train Leaving Every Minute
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx that created them, and the fine actors that embodied them on screen.
My deepest thanks to Jean.
A/N: Parker Willets and Freddy Minyard are original characters, as is Raleigh Close.  No such team as the Mountaineers ever existed to my knowledge.
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There's a train everyday leaving either way
There's a world, you know
There's a way to go
And you'll soon be gone - that's just as well
This is my opening farewell
Jackson Browne “My Opening Farewell”
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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #26 on: January 04, 2007, 12:18:50 am »
I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/79874.html#cutid1

Chapter Thirteen: How Bad Do You Want It
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx that created them, and the fine actors that embodied them on screen.
My deepest thanks to Jean.
A/N: Sgt. Worfin and his quote are a nod to Buckaroo Banzai. 
Congrats to Tes, who guessed Jack’s occupation, and to Vic, who guessed what I thought would be my big surprise, ie: the billboard.  You guys are too cluey by half.
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So you put a hold on happiness....a day, a week, a year
You got to bring somethin' to this party, boy, if you party here
And if you're lookin' for love, you better look some other way
If you're lookin' for love; I have to ask you
How bad do you want it?
Don Henley, “How Bad Do You Want It?”

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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #27 on: January 04, 2007, 01:04:02 am »
Just left a comment at your LJ, but I loved this chapter!!  :)

the billboard... *thud*  If I saw that while driving I would probably drive off the road  ::)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #28 on: January 05, 2007, 09:37:41 am »
I'll Be Seeing You:  http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/80372.html#cutid1

Chapter Fourteen: Once, the World Was New
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx that created them, and the fine actors that embodied them on screen.
My deepest thanks to Jean.
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Once upon a time, once when you were mine
I remember skies, reflecting in your eyes
I wonder where you are; I wonder if you think about me
Once upon a time in your wildest dreams
The Moody Blues “Your Wildest Dreams”
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Re: I'll Be Seeing You: A Brokeback A/U fanfic by bailey
« Reply #29 on: January 07, 2007, 12:33:00 am »
I'll Be Seeing You: http://baileymoyes.livejournal.com/80467.html#cutid1

Chapter Fifteen: Dreams Die Hard
A Brokeback A/U diverging from the original at the time of Ennis’s divorce.
Rated: R for language, adult themes.
Disclaimer: I have borrowed these characters from Annie Proulx that created them, and the fine actors that embodied them on screen.
My deepest thanks to Jean.
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When I was a child, I caught a fleeting glimpse
Out of the corner of my eye
I turned to look but it was gone
I cannot put my finger on it now
The child is grown
The dream is gone
And I have become
Comfortably numb.
Pink Floyd, “Comfortably Numb”
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