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"Dupree's Choice" begins here.

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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2006, 08:44:55 am »
WHOO WEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was fast Louise!!  :-*
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2006, 08:50:22 am »
that's because I only wrote a little bit!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2006, 08:53:16 am »
I guess if we want to comment, we should do it there, right?

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #4 on: December 04, 2006, 08:54:23 am »
that is up to you.  But since I haven't gotten very far in the story, there isnt much to say!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #5 on: December 04, 2006, 08:55:09 am »
I don't have any yet, just asking.

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #6 on: December 04, 2006, 08:56:15 am »
It's looking very good Louise. I gotta go out so I'll stop by the chat later and give you my impression. I read it fast, but I liked it.
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #7 on: December 04, 2006, 09:14:18 am »
Good start, Louise. I like it!

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #8 on: December 04, 2006, 09:15:43 am »
Oooo!  I love it so far!       I was wondering when we'd meet his family.

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #9 on: December 04, 2006, 09:17:11 am »
I ran into a difficulty with the bar thing so the bar thing is going to have to happen Monday.

But I am loosening up the tight time framing I had been doing - this shouldn't be quite so much of an issue to get from Day A to Day B, which was driving me bonkers with "The Red Stallion."  So many characters, so much action to coordinate.  No wonder my pressure was up!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”