Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)

[louisev]

no no no.. no cheesy outside-the-bar coincidence run-ins!  I hate coincidence run-ins when I can help it!

When I can't help it, what can I say?

[David]

I was just thinking about the last chapter.

Ellery is in the bar, getting ready to leave. He stopped by after work so it might be 5 pm or so?

Jeremy was supposed to meet Nick outside the bar at 5 pm.

Is Ellery going to walk in on their assignation? Hmmm?

L

oooo!   excellent idea!       Ellery walks outside into the blinding snow and sees Nick and Jeremy in a hot steamy embrace! 

Ellery: "Good evening Gentlemen.   It seems to be hotter out here than inside I see.   Dupree let me guess, you're just giving this Sailor mouth to mouth resusitation right?"

[louisev]

from this I conclude:

You guys really really miss Ellery.  So my next story after "Dupree's Choice" I will make the "Ellery meets Ennis" chapter, how's that?  Then the reception.

Oh, and there will be two chapters here soon in rapid succession.

[RonitR]

I don't think I've seen this picture of Dupree before.

I mean, Nick looks good, but Dupree looks just...just...good god it's HOT in here!!

[yb]

from this I conclude:

You guys really really miss Ellery.  So my next story after "Dupree's Choice" I will make the "Ellery meets Ennis" chapter, how's that?  Then the reception.

Is this "Ellery meets Ennis" about the beginning of their relationship from Ellery's POV?

[louisev]

update to "Dupree's Choice"


http://louisev.livejournal.com/173080.html  "13.  Jeremy"

[louisev]

Is this "Ellery meets Ennis" about the beginning of their relationship from Ellery's POV?

yup.

I am even going to experiment here, I think, and write it in the first person.

[David]

I don't think I've seen this picture of Dupree before.

I mean, Nick looks good, but Dupree looks just...just...good god it's HOT in here!!

I do have some better pics of our Nick, but they require some ...um,  editing to make them g-rated.     He has a nice profile too.

[yb]

yup.

I am even going to experiment here, I think, and write it in the first person.

This is great.  I know some people don't like reading stories written in the first person, but I've read a few and liked them a lot, of course it all depends on the writer's ability and I'm sure this'll be as riveting as the others you have written.

[Kazza]

update to "Dupree's Choice"


http://louisev.livejournal.com/173080.html  "13.  Jeremy"

SPOLIER

OK -so now I'm confused. Is Nick losing his shine slightly, or is it just Jeremy's nervousness that's throwing me off? I just thought he seemed a little pushy or something. Nothing definate, just something subtle. 

It could be just be because Lance voiced his doubts and we've been discussing it here. 

Mmmm... gonna have to go back and read it again slowly.

Love the idea of and Ellery meets Ennis story from Ellery's POV. 

Karen