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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #360 on: December 09, 2006, 08:49:18 pm »
and...

another update!  I can't stop!


http://louisev.livejournal.com/175791.html  "22.   Jeremy"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #361 on: December 09, 2006, 08:57:29 pm »
and...

another update!  I can't stop!


http://louisev.livejournal.com/175791.html  "22.   Jeremy"


Can't stop?     Damn woman!    When Jeremy tells Nick that he wants to stop having sex too,  that'll have Nick re-enlisting.

But at this point I don't care.   After his romp with that lumberyard guy I'm ready to run Nick out of town myself!

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #362 on: December 09, 2006, 09:05:17 pm »
NOW WHERE IS MY PITCHFORK!?   >:(

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #363 on: December 09, 2006, 09:13:55 pm »
good god, David.  Don't do it!  Calm down, calm down.

is it too late to give you a promise of a happy ending?
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #364 on: December 09, 2006, 09:21:17 pm »
Can't stop?     Damn woman!    When Jeremy tells Nick that he wants to stop having sex too,  that'll have Nick re-enlisting.

But at this point I don't care.   After his romp with that lumberyard guy I'm ready to run Nick out of town myself!

hmmm  ??? that's the easiest choice to pick....to drive  him off

lets see what Jeremy will decide to do; now I see there is more than one field where he has to make his choice…can’t wait to know

amazing chapters  Louise
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #365 on: December 09, 2006, 09:23:24 pm »
RE:  CHAPTER 20.


    NO!!

Why Nick?   why would you possibly do that?    :'(   :'(  :'( :'(



Come on David - you were never 22 and all horns? - not ta mention cornfused? He's a navy boy - gotta be sumthin wrong with em, right?
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #366 on: December 09, 2006, 09:31:34 pm »
Come on David - you were never 22 and all horns? - not ta mention cornfused? He's a navy boy - gotta be sumthin wrong with em, right?

Hell yes I was 22 and all horns.    Now I'm 40 and still all horns, but far wiser!

The squid professes his love to Jeremy, has lots of toe curling sex with em,  comes out to his parents and strangers, then at the drop of a hat he lets that local guy fuck him?

My first question is WHY?    If you have the world by the balls why do you slit the wrist thats holding them?

My second question?   With Jeremy being so fucked up about being gay and nervous about how fast things are going, how could this help the situation?

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #367 on: December 09, 2006, 09:36:39 pm »
The way Ah see it, - Imperfect Nick has control issues. also he badly needed ta be topped - sumthin Jeremie's been a little shy in doin so far. Can't be comparin mature Ellery ta very young & cornfused Nick - is all I'm sayin
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #368 on: December 09, 2006, 09:36:55 pm »
Greetings everyone!

I am chiming in late today, just to say howdy and then I gotta go offline again.
I have been out all day, I now have a splitting headache .. but I gotta get to a birthday party in an hour.
I am sure alcohol is what I need right now!   ;)

Can't wait to get back here later and catch up on the thread and the updates!

Night everyone!  :-*


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #369 on: December 09, 2006, 09:48:26 pm »
yes, it is the middle of the night.

Yes, I am still writing.

I expect to have chapter 23 ... yes... up in the next half hour to hour.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”