Author Topic: If you were the writer...... (Read 9425 times)

DeeDee · « **on:** April 12, 2006, 04:01:14 pm »

Ok now you know I'm bored. We had a post with our favorite "wordless moments".
How about we take some of these moments and put thoughts in their heads as if we were the writers.

For example:

When Jack is leaning against the truck in the beginning, looking at Ennis.maybe he's thinking..
"damn, this heres a hot one".

I would love to read how you guys think. You're a bunch of talented people, so I know this stuff is gonna be good.

DeeDee · « **Reply #1 on:** April 12, 2006, 05:45:12 pm »

Come on you guys...come out and play..

Lumière · « **Reply #2 on:** April 15, 2006, 02:49:44 pm »

- When Jack is listening to Ennis open up for the very first time up on Brokeback, he lowers his head slightly, listening to Ennis' sad tale of his life, I think he was thinking:
"Oh Shit! What I wouldn't do to jump on him right now and give him a big ol' hug...Look at those eyes and those lips..gosh, I hope he doesn't notice my d!!k getting bigger ... calm down Jack, calm down,...", then he turns and says to Ennis: "Friend, that's the most words you've spoke in the past 2 weeks"

- After waiting anxiously for Jack's arrival the day of their reunion, Ennis was thoroughly wound up, what with the beer and chain-smoking, I bet when he rushed out the door and saw jack standing there, he was thinking:
"Jesus H, that boy looks fine! No more wringing out lil Ennis, I am so getting proper laid tonight...!"...

DeeDee · « **Reply #3 on:** April 15, 2006, 04:42:55 pm »

little Ennis? ROTF

Lumière · « **Reply #4 on:** April 15, 2006, 08:51:36 pm »

Quote from: DeeDee on April 15, 2006, 04:42:55 pm

little Ennis? ROTF

Ya!

I think he'd rather wring out lil Jack..

DeeDee · « **Reply #5 on:** April 15, 2006, 08:58:02 pm »

Quote from: lucise on April 15, 2006, 08:51:36 pm

Quote from: DeeDee on April 15, 2006, 04:42:55 pm
little Ennis? ROTF

Ya!
I think he'd rather wring out lil Jack..

Wouldn't we all?

kirkmusic · « **Reply #6 on:** April 16, 2006, 02:49:43 am »

Jack while Ennis is washing.

"Potatoes. Think potatoes. Don't look. Don't fcking look! Peel. Breathe. Peel."

DeeDee · « **Reply #7 on:** April 16, 2006, 04:36:13 pm »

Quote from: kirkmusic on April 16, 2006, 02:49:43 am

Jack while Ennis is washing.

"Potatoes. Think potatoes. Don't look. Don't fcking look! Peel. Breathe. Peel."

LMAO..... that is funny

Sheyne · « **Reply #8 on:** April 17, 2006, 05:53:08 am »

Lureen at thanksgiving dinner table: "Hurrah!!! He finally grew some balls!"

Lumière · « **Reply #9 on:** April 17, 2006, 12:31:51 pm »

Haha - great additions by Anke and Sheyne!

After Jack and Ennis reunite and share that unbelievably passionate kiss in that alley..

..they finally tear themselves away from each other and go up the stairs to say Hello to Alma. After Jack said "...married the prettiest lil girl in Childress Texas ... Lureen", he lowers his head and tries to keep his breathing stable. I bet at that moment he is thinking:
"Someone get me outta here quick! Get me outta here before I explode! Shit, my hands are shaking, Jesus H, he smells so fuckin' good ... stop starring at this crotch Jack, just look at his eyes Jack, eyes!" ...

Heavens knows how they actually made it to the motel in one piece..I might've crashed the car in anticipation!

chefjudy · « **Reply #10 on:** April 17, 2006, 02:44:53 pm »

you guys are too much - I'm laughing as I read these.......................

Lumière · « **Reply #11 on:** April 17, 2006, 02:49:18 pm »

Quote from: pipedream on April 17, 2006, 02:41:52 pm

Damn it, Lucise, you did it again! How come you always bring out the worst in me??? Okay,folks, you better take a sip of Old Rose Whiskey before reading this:

Ennis is hammerin' Jack in that tent scene. Jack can't quite believe this is actually happening and thinks:

Oh, my freaking god! Hallelujah! Water walking Jesus! Am I dreaming or is he really banging me right now? Who would’ve thought, old Ennis…. Ouch! Ah, I mean: hmmmm! Arrrh! Glad I gave him a hand....

Then he can't think anymore because he is too busy, pounding the ground.

LOL!!
Someone posted something funny on the old board a while back; that when jack tells Ennis to quit his hammerin', he is actually saying: "Ennis, quit ya hammerin' out there, and start ya hammerin' in here"..lol

Pipedream · « **Reply #12 on:** April 17, 2006, 02:53:24 pm »

Quote from: lucise on April 17, 2006, 02:49:18 pm

Someone posted something funny on the old board a while back; that when jack tells Ennis to quit his hammerin', he is actually saying: "Ennis, quit ya hammerin' out there, and start ya hammerin' in here"..lol

I know, that cracked me up, too! I just blatantly stole the idea from whoever it was....

ednbarby · « **Reply #13 on:** April 17, 2006, 03:01:24 pm »

Quote from: kirkmusic on April 16, 2006, 02:49:43 am

Jack while Ennis is washing.

"Potatoes. Think potatoes. Don't look. Don't fcking look! Peel. Breathe. Peel."

That is *perfection*, Kirk. I love it. Thank you!

I've pictured it a bit more primal, like "Son of a bitch... You gotta be fuckin' kiddin' me. Fuck. FUCK." Yours is much prettier.

Lumière · « **Reply #14 on:** April 17, 2006, 04:42:32 pm »

I love this thread!

One scene that always amuses me:
After Jack finishes taking a leak, he comes back and shows off his "rodeo pride" or belt buckle to Ennis who just looks at him amusingly for a while. I bet Ennis is thinking:
"Hmmm..nice package...! ... belt buckle isn't bad either!"

[Ok, I'll come clean, maybe Ennis wasn't thinking that, but I was.

...
It was an open invitation to stare at his crotch, who could resist? Not me...

).

MaineWriter · « **Reply #15 on:** April 17, 2006, 04:56:52 pm »

"The morning after." Ennis sits up, rubs his head.

Holy fuckin' hell, my head feels like shit. Why the fuck did I drink so much of that rotgut whiskey last night? Wait a minute, where am I? looks around I'm in the tent...Oh fuck, what went on? Wait a minute, I know what went on... starts to pull up pants, looks down li'l Ennis, you tellin' me you liked what went on?

DeeDee · « **Reply #16 on:** April 17, 2006, 05:00:33 pm »

Quote from: lucise on April 17, 2006, 04:42:32 pm

I love this thread!

One scene that always amuses me:
After Jack finishes taking a leak, he comes back and shows off his "rodeo pride" or belt buckle to Ennis who just looks at him amusingly for a while. I bet Ennis is thinking:
"Hmmm..nice package...! ... belt buckle is not bad either!"

[Ok, I'll come clean, maybe Ennis wasn't thinking that, but I was. ).

I don't know you guys all that well, but I knew I would be laughing my butt off at some of these. I could tell just by the threads, you all have great senses of humor.

ednbarby · « **Reply #17 on:** April 17, 2006, 05:28:36 pm »

How about Jack's pose against the pick-up in the first scene. Always makes me think he's thinkin' "Hey, boy..." Nothing more. Just that.

And when we were watching it together the other night, my husband goes in Ennis' morning-after scene, "Oh, shit. What the *hell* did I do last night?" Then, when he's looking into the tent at Jack that night before going in, he says, "Whatever it was, I wanna do it again."

DeeDee · « **Reply #18 on:** April 17, 2006, 05:56:41 pm »

Quote from: kirkmusic on April 16, 2006, 02:49:43 am

Jack while Ennis is washing.

"Potatoes. Think potatoes. Don't look. Don't fcking look! Peel. Breathe. Peel."

That's it Kirk, I'm finished. I just popped in the movie because, well, no reason and I cannot stop laughing at the potato peeling scene. I will never look at it the same again. ROTF

kirkmusic · « **Reply #19 on:** April 17, 2006, 11:40:13 pm »

DeeDee - heh heh heh

Sheyne · « **Reply #20 on:** April 18, 2006, 03:11:59 am »

Ennis wakes up after the first tent scene: inner monologue begins:

"oooh god.. my head.. shit, where am I? Oh yeah, tent. No, not that tent, the big tent. What the hell am I doin' still down here? *sits up* my head.. dammit.. My pants?!?! Shiiit, thought it felt chilly in here... what the hell are they d - *THE look over at Jack* That's Jack. Oh, hell the whiskey... we got into the whiskey last night... Hell, is that his ass? Jack's ass... my pants... *it dawns* oh hell, run Ennis run! But slow-like... so's you don't wake him... shiiiiit..."

Ray · « **Reply #21 on:** April 18, 2006, 04:53:01 am »

Ennis wakes up the morning after the first tent scene and looks down at his half mast pants...
'Come into the tent and get warm' he said! I got frigg'n' icicles on me nuts!

kirkmusic · « **Reply #22 on:** April 18, 2006, 08:00:44 am »

Aguirre

All I wanted to do was tell him about his friggin uncle. Can they please just finish up so I can do that?

Ray · « **Reply #23 on:** April 18, 2006, 08:13:43 am »

Quote from: kirkmusic on April 18, 2006, 08:00:44 am

Aguirre

All I wanted to do was tell him about his friggin uncle. Can they please just finish up so I can do that?

Hehehehe, nah I reckon he was more likely saying "Stuff yer uncle' I wish I had a bag of spuds!"

Let's face it, the log only disappeared once Aguirre arrived!

kirkmusic · « **Reply #24 on:** April 18, 2006, 08:17:41 am »

Hey, there's one!

Jack
What'd I do with that log?

Lumière · « **Reply #25 on:** April 18, 2006, 12:50:36 pm »

Another:

After a long day, Ennis gets home to his wife and 2 sick, irritable daughters...he runs over to their bedroom and spends some time trying to comfort them. Later that night, exhausted, he drags himself, shoulders aching and sits at the edge of the bed. Alma comes in, rubs his shoulders and tries to coax him into moving the family to town..Ennis looks distracted, his mind is on a roll ...:
" Oh..all those nights when Jack rubbed my neck back at the camp, those nights when i could feel his strong body ontop of me...hmmmm..all those wet kisses and the feeling of his hands all over my body..awwww....the aching feeling of his ... I gotta fuckin' stop this, I gotta quit dreamin about that sonofabitch..hmmm..maybe i'll save it for the shower..." ...

Alma continues to rub his neck, waiting for a response...Ennis thinks
"Shit, what was she yapping on about..?..oh...moving to town..fuck!"...
He tries to ignore his hard-on for a second, shakes off the images of Jack in his mind and responds to alma
"Nah, rent in town is too hi' "...

Pipedream · « **Reply #26 on:** April 18, 2006, 12:56:48 pm »

Ennis after the big reunion-kiss, trying pull away from Jack Nasty:

Hell, Jack, what are you doing to my shirt?? I’ve just made an effort to tuck it in, hunh!?

Lumière · « **Reply #27 on:** May 02, 2007, 04:15:20 pm »

Bumping some precious old threads!!

mvansand76 · « **Reply #28 on:** May 16, 2007, 08:00:28 am »

Quote from: kirkmusic on April 18, 2006, 08:17:41 am

Hey, there's one!

Jack
What'd I do with that log?

Oh God, this cracked me up!

The Log.... The Log....The Log...!

It drives me absolutely insane!!!!

At the "You gonna do this again next summer?" scene:
Jack:

Hey, bud, before I leave, could you close the hood of my car properly? And could you throw in a goodbye kiss?

brokebackjack · « **Reply #29 on:** June 13, 2007, 05:53:35 am »

Actually, I'd like to see--if it's true and actually happened and actually exists LOLOL!!-- that outtake from the filming of BBM up in Canada, where Heath, during one take of the Dozy Embrace, supposedly became a complete goofball and stuck his tongue in jake's ear while passionately whispering 'Take me you hot hot Swedish Jew!" and the whole crew lost it.

If it's true, that would be one of the funniest things any of us ever saw....

mvansand76 · « **Reply #30 on:** June 13, 2007, 07:10:52 am »

Quote from: brokebackjack on June 13, 2007, 05:53:35 am

Actually, I'd like to see--if it's true and actually happened and actually exists LOLOL!!-- that outtake from the filming of BBM up in Canada, where Heath, during one take of the Dozy Embrace, supposedly became a complete goofball and stuck his tongue in jake's ear while passionately whispering 'Take me you hot hot Swedish Jew!" and the whole crew lost it.

If it's true, that would be one of the funniest things any of us ever saw....

WHAT?

God, if that really happened, then I would love to see it, that's so funny!

Where'd you read that?

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Author Topic: If you were the writer...... (Read 9425 times)

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