Hi, el_wing,
I'm finally caught up with your story and wanted to drop you a line and thank you. I really like the original premise of your story and am very impressed with how well you've handled the issue of Jack's blindness and Ennis's reaction to it - so touching and so real.
This line in this last chapter really jumped out at me -
"I need you Jack Twist, more 'n you ever'll need me."
How important for a blind Jack to hear those words.
Thanks again - I look forward to hearing Ennis' POV in the next chapter.
Marie