Author Topic: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content  (Read 9238 times)

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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #10 on: March 04, 2007, 03:27:24 am »
and...

Here is Part Nine:

http://community.livejournal.com/cityofslaves/5875.html  "Death and the Maidens"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #11 on: March 08, 2007, 06:06:12 pm »
it is Friday, which means I will be adding more content.  And there is a holiday on Monday so I hope to get a chunk finished.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #12 on: March 09, 2007, 02:10:59 pm »


http://community.livejournal.com/cityofslaves/5875.html  Part 9: that page has been refreshed with more content.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #13 on: June 14, 2007, 02:27:12 am »
I am working on finishing Section 9 now and should have some new content up by the end of the week courtesy of fan requests by my host here in Neckarsulm!!!

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #14 on: June 14, 2007, 12:46:46 pm »
omg i didnt even know COS was updated! 

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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #15 on: June 14, 2007, 12:54:54 pm »
well it isnt quite yet.  I did get section 9 started in March but I have not yet updated it.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #16 on: June 14, 2007, 01:08:48 pm »
i've waited this long, i dont mind waiting longer.

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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #17 on: June 14, 2007, 03:12:26 pm »
I'm glad to see you are still (or again) working on this. I thought maybe I missed some announcement saying you didn't have the time to add more content or something like that and was prepared to more or less wait it out. ;)
Anyways, I'm looking forward to the update. :)
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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #18 on: June 14, 2007, 05:38:42 pm »
I did not abandon this project.  Unlike my other stories - this one is already written.  The other writer for the story, Czaradas's player, has been busy with a seriously ill family member and has had little time to give input to the 149,000 words I wrote in the first nine sections ... and if you have been following my Daily Thoughts "Louise on Tour" you would know I have been around the world and back and been to three continents in four months doing consulting work, which has sapped much of my project energy, but I am still plugging away.

Last night I was able to spend some time with my co-author to go through some of the original additions I made to the story at section 9, and am prepared to go on.

The part that makes this story different from my "Greenlea" stories or my other original stories, is that the story was completed in spring of 2006, and it needs only to be edited and filled out with additional surrounding text.  There is much, much, MUCH more to come!  so to speak. ahem.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: A Romance in the City of Slaves - Adult Content
« Reply #19 on: June 14, 2007, 07:06:10 pm »
I am going to try different pages for new added sections now:

Part Nine:  Death and the Maidens (Continued)  http://community.livejournal.com/cityofslaves/5991.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”