Afternoon.
Well, I'm reading it too, and have enjoyed this version of the guys deciding to make a go of it right away. The writing catches the substance of the guys, as well as the Twists and the other OCs. Like how both of them are growing into themselves with their new jobs, finally having someone tell them that they do a good job and can be trusted. So different from what each grew up with. It gives them confidence to continue on with each other.
Thanks for starting this thread, so others can discover it.