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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
louisev:
and... a Saturday bonus:
chapter 29!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/243841.html
frantic65:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 19, 2008, 09:34:50 pm ---you want to know what is ironic about that particular scene in that particular story?
It took place about halfway through the fifth volume. Which seems to imply that the person had read a WHOLE LOT OF THE STORY before being turned off by that scene. And I find that somewhat amusing. If the reader didn't like the premise of Ennis finding a new lover then why are they still reading half a million words later? I would have dropped it on page 50 or something.
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I know-the same thought crossed my mind & if I felt that way you would have most definitely lost me when painfully shy, meant to suffer forever Ennis, made a move on Ellery, the predator, at the Rose Hotel! Too funny & ironic!
Woot!! Saturday night bonus chappie!!!! Yippee, zippee, off to read!!
yb:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 19, 2008, 06:23:11 pm ---well how do you like that? I deleted my stories from the entire BBM community and all of my links from Davecullen.com - and PEOPLE ARE STILL TALKING ABOUT IT!
go figure. Now that is persistence if ever I have seen it.
For anyone who lurks over here from DC and wants to read the NEW version of my books, you can find them publically available at:
tcreader.livejournal.com
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They are still talking about your previous version over on DCF? Do they have a life? I think there's only one MO!Ennis story approved by them - the one which made Jack a saint to let Ennis moved on.
louisev:
Yes, they are still talking about it. And I don't know which 'Moving on' stories ever got the golden blessing, but I do know it wasn't mine!!!
mariez:
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 19, 2008, 07:37:54 pm ---And you are still rocking & rolling as The Rookie proves!!!!
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Amen and Hallelujah!
SPOILERS
Yay for a bonus chapter! Gotta love feisty Edna. We got a "Hell no" and a "she can just suck eggs.." out of her tonight! LOL!
I've been wanting to see Ellery and Colson and Jeremy and Nick get together socially - but those two couples along with both sets of "parents" - that would be an interesting evening, to say the least!
And I had to believe we were going to hear:
“I probably didn’t need ta know that.”
out of Wes sometime during the night! LOL! But, Wes's concerns were also kind of touching and very fatherly. He wasn't just being nosy, he truly wanted to make sure his boy is ok. Nicely done, Louise!
Thanks,
Marie
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