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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
louisev:
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I had a good time writing that chapter. Whether Wes likes it or not, he is being dragged kicking and screaming into being the loving Dad of a kinky gay man! Is his heart big enough for the task? Well... I think so!
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 19, 2008, 10:39:38 pm ---Yes, they are still talking about it. And I don't know which 'Moving on' stories ever got the golden blessing, but I do know it wasn't mine!!!
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Well it should have been yours Louise, because, IMHO, YOUR moving on story was, and still is, the best of the lot. And no I,m not being a creep I,m just telling it like it is, as I normally do lol. ;) I wonder if AP ever acutally read your story? Just curious as to what she would have thought of it. I wonder about these things. ::) ;)
MaineWriter:
A bonus chapter...what a treat! Thanks, Louise.
L
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 20, 2008, 02:00:37 am ---SPOILERS
I had a good time writing that chapter.
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It shows!!
I was laughing out loud when I read Wes's 'What the hell a you wearin, Ellery?' :laugh: :laugh:
Ah, I love the Ellery - Wes interaction. Of course he had to notice it. You can't fool Our Fearless Leader. And Ellery's '“It’s a pressure mark from a restraint device. Not police equipment.' is just hilarious!
Somehow finding out about what Colson and Ellery are up to in the bedroom probably isn't going to have the same effect on Wes and Edna as it did on Jeremy and Nick! :laugh: :laugh:
louisev:
and now, chapter 30:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/244067.html
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