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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
frantic65:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 30, 2008, 06:38:27 pm ---"
Damn, Louise - with all this talk, somebody in Tourmaline needs to break into their toy drawers right quick! LOL!
Marie
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Can you imagine all the trouble these boys would get into if they had had the internet available?? OMG look at the ideas Colson gets from his own imagination while mucking out stalls!!
mariez:
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 30, 2008, 06:44:22 pm ---Can you imagine all the trouble these boys would get into if they had had the internet available?? OMG look at the ideas Colson gets from his own imagination while mucking out stalls!!
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LOL! The mind boggles. Although....I've got to say that I'd put Colson's stall-mucking imagination up against the best of them! It's always those quiet ones, you know.....another reason why I can't wait to find out exactly what Jeremy told Nicky "in the dark."
Was that an obvious enough hint? :laugh:
Marie
frantic65:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 30, 2008, 07:00:18 pm ---LOL! The mind boggles. Although....I've got to say that I'd put Colson's stall-mucking imagination up against the best of them! It's always those quiet ones, you know.....another reason why I can't wait to find out exactly what Jeremy told Nicky "in the dark."
Was that an obvious enough hint? :laugh:
Marie
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Subtle as a sledgehammer!! ;D Now the real question is....will N&J co-operate & share their secrets with Louise??? ::)
PS. Thanks for the happier diversions bettermost buddiesl. This media crap is bringing me down again!! :'(
louisev:
I wrote this hours ago and never posted the link!
For those of you who get your updates here, here is chapter 42 with Colson's new theory about Paula:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/247379.html "Chapter 42"
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 31, 2008, 01:17:30 am ---http://louisev.livejournal.com/247379.html "Chapter 42"
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SPOILERS
This was a great conversation between Ellery and Colson. Everything about it was so real - not only the dialogue, but their little gestures and expressions, as well. How Colson grunted and chuckled, shook his head slowly, "brandished" his biscuit, studied Ellery quietly. And I like that we can see how Ellery's mood is now glum and pensive, as opposed to the angry, cavalier attitude he displayed at the office. He is truly in a quandary about the situation and his own feelings.
But, hey, on the bright side, it appears that Colson did his part to keep the economy of Tourmaline going! LOL!
Thanks!
Marie
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