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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 31, 2008, 01:17:30 am ---I wrote this hours ago and never posted the link!
For those of you who get your updates here, here is chapter 42 with Colson's new theory about Paula:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/247379.html "Chapter 42"
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You mean to tell me, that you wrote this hours ago, and we had to wait??? tsk tsk tsk, that will never do. Right, as punishment for that, we expect an extra long chapter today, FULL of smut with the new toys. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
louisev:
--- Quote from: souxi on January 31, 2008, 12:54:16 pm ---You mean to tell me, that you wrote this hours ago, and we had to wait??? tsk tsk tsk, that will never do. Right, as punishment for that, we expect an extra long chapter today, FULL of smut with the new toys. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
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hahahah you caught me. I got so caught up in editing and posting the chapters of "Looking for Answers" that I didn't realize that I hadn't announced it. Of course I think you were long in bed by then, Souxi!
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 31, 2008, 12:58:52 pm ---hahahah you caught me. I got so caught up in editing and posting the chapters of "Looking for Answers" that I didn't realize that I hadn't announced it. Of course I think you were long in bed by then, Souxi!
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I probably was. When I check back here tomorow, I expect to find a LONG page filled with smut with the new toys. :laugh:
louisev:
hahahaha ! man alive, I sure miss you demanding readers!
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 31, 2008, 09:10:22 am ---
SPOILERS
This was a great conversation between Ellery and Colson. Everything about it was so real - not only the dialogue, but their little gestures and expressions, as well. How Colson grunted and chuckled, shook his head slowly, "brandished" his biscuit, studied Ellery quietly. And I like that we can see how Ellery's mood is now glum and pensive, as opposed to the angry, cavalier attitude he displayed at the office. He is truly in a quandary about the situation and his own feelings.
But, hey, on the bright side, it appears that Colson did his part to keep the economy of Tourmaline going! LOL!
Thanks!
Marie
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What? I didn't read about no muffins... ;D
You're a master of dialogue Louise, but, of course, we already knew that.
Great chapter, thanks!
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