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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 31, 2008, 07:50:11 pm ---I am glad to see I am contributing to people cheering up. After the media blitz of the last 9 days or so I think we are all exhausted by certain headlines!
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Yes Louise, you certainly are helping to cheer us all up. I do love Ellery. It,s the way he speaks his mind, he reminds me of me lol. That snooty bloody Paula needs putting in her place, good on ya Ellery. And how wise Colson is, to know that secretly she has the hots for Ellery. Of course he would be blind to that wouldn,t he lol.
Now then, I,ve got one more word to say to you young lady..............TOYS. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 31, 2008, 07:36:07 pm ---
(((Fabienne))) Yummy is right! How did you know that blueberry is my favorite? :-*
Thanks!
Marie
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What can I say? We apparently have the same taste in sexy police officers and horse trainers muffins. 8)
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 31, 2008, 10:49:13 pm ---and chapter 43: it isnt full of toys but it is full of intrigue!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/247784.html 'Chapter 43'
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Ha! Intrigue, that's good too!
SPOILERS
To Paula’s surprise, Ellery laughed out loud. “Well touche, boy. You want me ta play nice, I’ll play nice.” And he turned a brilliant smile on Paula. “I am very sorry I insulted yer underwear or whatever ya took it as. I’ll try ta act more respectful, at least in public, in the future. That good enough?”
That Ellery! He's never going to learn is he? ::)
frantic65:
Chapter 43
Paula is learning to take what you can get from the Chief Deputy because he is not in any way, shape, or form predictable. I think a little social get together with Ellery/Colson, Jeremy/Nick & Paula/any half way decent straight man she can find in the streets of Tourmaline ;) would be fun. Paula needs to get more comfortable with alternate lifestyles & I think seeing how Ellery interacts with Colson might help her know how to handle him better (& maybe she can make some new friends in Colson & Nick!)
There are some terrific character dynamics emerging from this storyline-thanks yet again Louise!!
MaineWriter:
Are there any halfway decent single straight men on the streets of Tourmaline? Sometimes I think, if there was an ocean and beaches, it could be Provincetown, Massachusetts! LOL
L
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