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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
frantic65:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 01, 2008, 12:28:22 pm ---Are there any halfway decent single straight men on the streets of Tourmaline? Sometimes I think, if there was an ocean and beaches, it could be Provincetown, Massachusetts! LOL
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;D or maybe Key West! (hey Wes & Edna would get a kick out of a visit to the Keys on the way back from Puerto Rico!!)
louisev:
well now everyone has their own ideas about just how much of a pain in the ass Ellery is!
But I suppose, the way I am writing him, he is somewhat in denial about his skills in dealing with women, and trips over his ego repeatedly in trying to actually relate to someone who is his equal. Good thing he has a steady relationship with Colson because his string of bad choices wasn't entirely the other guy's fault. It's all part of my ongoing pursuit of making Ellery human despite his unabashed sexiness.
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 01, 2008, 12:28:22 pm ---Are there any halfway decent single straight men on the streets of Tourmaline? Sometimes I think, if there was an ocean and beaches, it could be Provincetown, Massachusetts! LOL
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Good question Leslie.
*looks to Louise* :-\ ;D
louisev:
oh gee, I don't know...!
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on February 01, 2008, 09:50:50 am ---What can I say? We apparently have the same taste in sexy police officers and horse trainers muffins. 8)
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Hee Hee! And excellent taste, it is - if I do say so myself!
--- Quote from: louise van hine on February 01, 2008, 01:19:01 pm ---... he is somewhat in denial about his skills in dealing with women, and trips over his ego repeatedly in trying to actually relate to someone who is his equal. Good thing he has a steady relationship with Colson because his string of bad choices wasn't entirely the other guy's fault. It's all part of my ongoing pursuit of making Ellery human despite his unabashed sexiness.
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Bingo!!!! Sometimes I want to kiss him, sometimes I want to smack him, and sometimes I want to hold a mirror up to his face- like when he's telling Colson about bossy people who always want to have the upper hand ::) :laugh: Your "ongoing pursuit" is succeeding brilliantly.
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on February 01, 2008, 12:28:22 pm ---Are there any halfway decent single straight men on the streets of Tourmaline? Sometimes I think, if there was an ocean and beaches, it could be Provincetown, Massachusetts! LOL
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Now there's a million dollar question if I ever heard one! LOL!
I'd love to see Paula develop some friendships - but I'm not so sure about Colson and Nick fitting the bill. They may not have Ellery's women issues, but they definitely have the same "I know you want my man - but over my dead body are you getting anywhere near him" issues! LOL!
Edna and Wes in Key West - love it! ;D
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
P.S. When he told Paula that Jeremy was his partner and he'd defend him with his life? Sigh. Definitely a "want to kiss him" moment!
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