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mariez:

--- Quote from: frantic65 on December 19, 2007, 06:28:12 pm ---I don't know about anyone else, but I am officially naughty enough now to fill in the blanks myself!  ;)

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 :laugh: OMG, that's hilarious, Fran - and so true!  Who'd a thunk it?



--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 19, 2007, 07:29:58 pm ---well, I'm not doing away with a lot of the explicit scenes lightly... it mainly has to do with maintaining the tone of the story, and I find that the tone changes a lot when there is an intimate scene, which works well sometimes but doesn't work as well when it"s more frequent!

at least that is how it feels to me.

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Yes, I can see that, Louise -  I understand what you're saying.  :)

Marie

mariez:
SPOILERS




Nice seeing everyone playing nice with each other! Now we can make some real progress. The problem in dealing with a bunch of lying snakes is that they're all ........lying snakes  - who'd sell their own mother out if they had the chance.  It'll be interesting to see what Leon has to say now!  Great job, Louise!

Marie

louisev:
you may all be interested to know, as I explained in chat with Leslie...

that I haven't got the slightest idea what's going on!

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 20, 2007, 02:46:12 pm ---you may all be interested to know, as I explained in chat with Leslie...

that I haven't got the slightest idea what's going on!

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That's not a problem Louise. Just as long as it takes lots and lots and lots of chapters to find out!  :)  :)

louisev:
well frankly, Fabienne...

it just might!

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