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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
frantic65:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 20, 2007, 02:46:12 pm ---you may all be interested to know, as I explained in chat with Leslie...
that I haven't got the slightest idea what's going on!
--- End quote ---
As if that would discourage me from reading!! I'm sure Ellery will be happy to let you know what's up-there's no way he could keep his mouth shut for long!
louisev:
as soon as Ellery figures it out he is bound to start talking about it, I am sure! In the meantime he might need to relax at home with some Clint Eastwood movies and his and Colson's favorite pastime, which is NOT baking biscuits.
louisev:
... and here is chapter 7:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/237845.html
frantic65:
SPOILER for Chapter 7
:( :( :( Ellery-do not mess around with high blood pressure & be 100% straight with your man or there will be hell to pay!!
mariez:
SPOILER
Uh Oh - dizziness is not a good thing. But it did get Ellery to the doctor tout de suite, so maybe he needed that physical manifestation of his high blood pressure in order for him to take it as seriously as he needs to. And our newly promoted Detective Sweet Thing will get a chance to do some of that investigating that he's so good at. Daddy Grey will be home soon and I'm betting a nice brisk walk is in Ellery's very near future.
I'm having a great time with this story, Louise! Thanks.
Marie
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