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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie

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louisev:
I am amazed and delighted at how much pleasure everyone has gotten out of the story so far.  thanks for the feedback!

louisev:
here is chapter 8 people!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/238226.html 

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 21, 2007, 10:17:53 pm ---here is chapter 8 people!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/238226.html 

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And another great chapter, Louise.  It's so sweet that Ellery and Colson both grumble when they're the "patient" but isn't it wonderful that they are there to spoil each other.

I love how Nicky wasn't bothered that Jeremy wasn't in the mood and how they brainstormed together - it's evident they have such respect for each other.  All A's for Nick?  Way to go - I can't say I'm surprised - there's a lot of depth to that naughty boy! 

Thanks!
Marie

louisev:
thanks Marie... sometimes I wonder whether the every day stuff gets boring for people!

and now back to the plot:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/238367.html

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 22, 2007, 06:40:03 pm ---sometimes I wonder whether the every day stuff gets boring for people!


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Never Louise, NEVER!  :)  :)

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