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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
louisev:
--- Quote from: Nutmeg Guy on December 23, 2007, 09:40:11 am ---Everyday stuff boring?
Heck, I could read about Dupree and Nicky doing laundry. Of course in my mind they would be naked of course... LOL.
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David! You're still reading too! Yay! I was just thinking about you yesterday. Okay, I will keep the naked laundry in mind. You have always given me such great ideas! Stay tuned for a chapter in a little while!
mariez:
--- Quote from: Nutmeg Guy on December 23, 2007, 09:40:11 am ---Everyday stuff boring?
Heck, I could read about Dupree and Nicky doing laundry. Of course in my mind they would be naked of course... LOL.
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Ha! I was going to say I could read about them going grocery shopping, but that laundry idea sounds good! ;D
Actually, I'd be interested to see how the Dupree/Sampson household divides household duties. From what we saw in the last story, Nicky appears to be a pretty good cook, and I think it would be sweet to see them shopping together.
Fabienne is right - it could never be boring!
Marie
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 22, 2007, 06:40:03 pm ---http://louisev.livejournal.com/238367.html
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SPOILERS
A trip to Yuma sounds like a good idea, and from what we've seen in the past, Jeremy is an excellent interrogator.
Yeah, I'm sure Paula is still smarting over the Dupree date debacle (not to mention her crush on Ellery), but it also looks like she thinks the sheriff's department is not sharing information with her.....I wonder if she'll run into Wes at the D.A.'s office....
Ellery is never going to be a person who can simply sit and relax, it's just not in him. It would be great if he and Colson could go riding together - it's been a long time and I'll bet Milli misses him!
Some interesting developments! Thanks.
Marie
louisev:
ok you Christmas shoppers, here is chapter 10:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/238803.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 23, 2007, 04:29:33 pm ---ok you Christmas shoppers, here is chapter 10:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/238803.html
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Ha! Well, my Christmas shopping officially ended Saturday night, and I'm now in the cooking/baking frenzy stage of holiday fun, but there's always time to read!
SPOILERS
I never got no money from Amos Marigold. He came by once over ta Sammy’s – I don’t know what for, I thought we was gettin rousted, but Sammy talked to em. He didn’t stay long.”
Ahh...verrrry interesting! The plot does indeed thicken.
“Well, that’s what I’m thinkin about right now. What I should be doin if my time is runnin out.”
Gah....don't talk like that Ellery! But....I'm curious, as always, to see what is going on in that brilliant, fascinating mind of his! The dialogue between Ellery and Colson is always so.....right and true and real. Amazing.
I hope you have a wonderful Christmas, Louise! You've given me a fantastic present with this story. Thank you.
Marie
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