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frantic65:
Taking a break from last minute wrapping to catch up & it appears that Ellery feels he is at a crossroad in his life. I love the fact that you have them having this conversation on horseback, Louise. It just feels right. No guesses as to what is going on in the Chief Deputy's brain but I hope he doesn't make any rash choices quite yet. Lack of things to do can become stressful too. But I don't know how much more of an "I can croak at any minute" conversation Colson can take before his own fears of losing Ellery like he did Adam will pop up & cause him to brood.

On the positive side, I'm happy to see Ellery is seeking Colson out to talk things over, because in the past he has been known to not be so open & honest with Colson over things like his health.

I'm not commenting on the Lang situation because unlike Dupree, I am a terrible detective & don't know what's up with Amos & that money. I'm intigued though & enjoying how that part of the story is playing out. Ok-back to last minute holiday preps!

Merry Christmas to all my fellow Greenlea lovers & especially to my favorite Storytellin' Santa Louise!!

Fran

louisev:
ho ho ho!

Sounds like you are all enjoying the new tale...

and here is chapter 11!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/238993.html

louisev:
 
A Christmas message for everyone:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/239157.html#cutid1

And chapter 12:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/239392.html

frantic65:
Thanks for the Christmas chapter & message! I am so happy to hear about the bright future for the citizens & readers of Greenlea! I hope I can some day own a published copy of this saga.

Now, I am a little miffed at Ellery for not including me in that private conversation with Colson but he did invite me into the bedroom in Chapter 12, so I guess I'll forgive him & his sexy ass this time!!

Hope you had a great Christmas!
Fran

louisev:
and here we go...

and a comment to those who have wondered 'what else did Colson and Ellery talk about' - that will all be revealed.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/239650.html  and now for chapter 13!

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