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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 26, 2007, 09:46:29 pm ---and here we go...
and a comment to those who have wondered 'what else did Colson and Ellery talk about' - that will all be revealed.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/239650.html and now for chapter 13!
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Good to know, Louise. Ellery's mind is a fascinating place!
SPOILERS
Has Jeremy already resigned his part-time job at the bar since he got the promotion? He'll be hard to replace! I like the way he handles frisky Nicky - firm but playful. And they both crack me up:
Nick grabbed a handful of Jeremy’s ass and squeezed. “I want ta head inta the breach, cause you got the best breach in town.”
“I am so glad you ain’t studyin literature, you’d be downright dangerous. Now lemme go do my job, I’ll be home as soon as I can.”
:laugh: :laugh:
I can see where Sanchez's remarks irritated Jeremy, and I think it's cute he's so protective of his Chief Deputy Legs, as Nicky would say. Now I'm wondering, when will Elllery return? Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
as always I am so grateful for the comments and feedback. I noticed the big drop in readership over the Christmas holiday and thought to myself, 'uh oh, I've lost my touch!' but things picked up today and I feel a little silly!
and yes to answer your question, somewhere in there from the end of the last story in sequence (which I believe was A Small Circle of Friends) Nick has started college and Jeremy is devoting himself entirely to police duty and we may get a chance to meet the new bouncer at the bar. Whose name I had earlier today and now I've forgotten it!
louisev:
and here is chapter 14:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/239877.html
enjoy!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 27, 2007, 10:46:44 pm ---and here is chapter 14:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/239877.html
enjoy!
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Great timing, Louise!
SPOILERS
Aww, poor Ellery. I understand how he feels, and I think it's a natural reaction to his father dying so young, and everything else that's been happening. We all go through those "doom and gloom" periods to a certain extent from time to time. I think letting off some steam to Wes about Amos is a good idea.
But I was alarmed to learn that all this time Bill has been listed as a beneficiary in Ellery's Will! Yikes! He needs to see his attorney right after his doctor's appointment tomorrow and get that changed ASAP! And while he's there he and Colson need some Power of Attorney papers drawn up, too!
I'm glad to learn that a trip to Puerto Rico seems to be in their future! :) Great stuff, Louise!
Thanks,
Marie
frantic65:
--- Quote from: mariez on December 27, 2007, 11:32:02 pm ---Great timing, Louise!
SPOILERS
Aww, poor Ellery. I understand how he feels, and I think it's a natural reaction to his father dying so young, and everything else that's been happening. We all go through those "doom and gloom" periods to a certain extent from time to time. I think letting off some steam to Wes about Amos is a good idea.
But I was alarmed to learn that all this time Bill has been listed as a beneficiary in Ellery's Will! Yikes! He needs to see his attorney right after his doctor's appointment tomorrow and get that changed ASAP! And while he's there he and Colson need some Power of Attorney papers drawn up, too!
I'm glad to learn that a trip to Puerto Rico seems to be in their future! :) Great stuff, Louise!
Thanks,
Marie
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Yea Marie, I had a Yikes moment over effing Bill still being in Ellery's will. I remember Ellery mentioning adding Colson to financial things way back in one of the early books, but then all hell broke loose & I guess he didn't get around to it. And although it's all depressing to think of, a POA is a must, especially since they have no legal rights as a couple.
I also hope that Ellery doesn't decide to keep things from Colson so he doesn't get scared. I don't think Colson meant he wants Ellery to hide things from him.
And I know Colson is afraid of flying but damn, Puerto Rico will be a blast, but with Wes & Edna there, Colson may not want to practice new binding techniques on Ellery!!!
Thanks again for a great story,
Fran
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