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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
louisev:
okay here is chapter 15:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/240198.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
I hope Ellery takes Dr. Sampson's advice seriously. If memory serves, he has a can of that protein shake somewhere in his kitchen from the last time he was told to gain weight! I'd love to drink a milkshake every night! LOL!
“Oh, that reminds me. Yer father in law says good job on yer promotion. He wanted me ta know how pleased he was.”
I love that! And I love Jeremy's reaction - he's too cute. But I'm glad Dr. Sampson seems to have a high opinion of Jeremy - he should. And Jeremy is a good influence on Nick - and Nick is a bad-in-a-good-way influence on Jeremy!
So now we're about to come full circle back to Chapter 1! I wonder what Leon will have to say....
Great job, Louise! Thanks.
Marie
P.S. If Ellery doesn't pay a visit to his attorney soon, I'm going to start drafting his Will and POAs myself! ;D
louisev:
SPOILER!
hee hee I knew somebody would like that 'Father in Law' line! Maybe Ellery ought to fire Stew and hire Marie!
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on December 28, 2007, 11:33:47 pm ---SPOILERS
and Nick is a bad-in-a-good-way influence on Jeremy!
--- End quote ---
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on December 29, 2007, 12:36:05 am ---
SPOILER!
hee hee I knew somebody would like that 'Father in Law' line! Maybe Ellery ought to fire Stew and hire Marie!
--- End quote ---
It was great Louise! Ellery rolling his eyes at the milkshakes advice.... LOL I can just imagine that!
Marie, do you think you could do some real work in the presence of Ellery? You sure about that? Hmmmm??? 8) :P
MaineWriter:
What a great treat to wake up to a new chapter! I crashed early and went to bed...I mean, I had a really hectic two day work week! LOL. But I am sitting here enjoying a delicious cup of coffee and reading great stuff about Ellery and Dupree. Thanks, Louise!
L
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