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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 02, 2008, 09:23:06 pm ---
here is chapter 20!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/241551.html
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SPOILERS
I hope we get to meet Mrs. Lang - I have the feeling she'll be quite a character. I was proud of Colson and how he calmed Ellery down with his matter-of-fact attitude about the Amos situation. Fran is right - Amos is not worth a heart attack or a stroke!
Also looking forward to meeting the new staff at the bar. This has to be a first for the Red Stallion - a barmaid and her boyfriend! That should prove interesting!
Did someone say handcuffs and ping pong paddle? ;D Not exactly "new age mumbo jumbo" - but a sure-fire stress reliever! Great stuff, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
frantic65:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 02, 2008, 10:11:54 pm ---SPOILERS
I hope we get to meet Mrs. Lang - I have the feeling she'll be quite a character. I was proud of Colson and how he calmed Ellery down with his matter-of-fact attitude about the Amos situation. Fran is right - Amos is not worth a heart attack or a stroke!
Also looking forward to meeting the new staff at the bar. This has to be a first for the Red Stallion - a barmaid and her boyfriend! That should prove interesting!
Did someone say handcuffs and ping pong paddle? ;D Not exactly "new age mumbo jumbo" - but a sure-fire stress reliever! Great stuff, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
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The New Age Chant & Pant treatment!! ;)
louisev:
yup, I am still here... some of my DVD watching activities have cut into my fiction time, but I am back and working at this hour on chapter 22.
louisev:
....annnnnd here we are! Chapter 22 everyone!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/242048.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 06, 2008, 05:26:14 pm ---yup, I am still here... some of my DVD watching activities have cut into my fiction time, but I am back and working at this hour on chapter 22.
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You can add mind reader to your other talents, Louise - I was just popping over her to check. Thanks for update. I'm also going to post the link to Chapter 21, just in case, 'cause it's too good to miss!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/241719.html
SPOILERS
Jeremy and Nick are so good for each other. And Nick, for all his "evil" influence ;) - is a Sweet Thing himself. He's not only in tune with Jeremy's moods and needs ;D - he has a genuine interest in what's happening in Jeremy's professional life. I'd love for Jeremy to slip and call Ellery "Legs!" OMG, could you picture Ellery's face or, better yet, Wes's reaction? :laugh: :laugh: And it's so cute to see that Jeremy likes to act that Nick is the horny one and that Nick, for all his bravado, still needs reassurance that Jeremy "likes what he sees." Great stuff! Thanks.
Marie
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