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New Greenlea Tale: The Rookie
frantic65:
Poor Lauren. Wayne is like some black cloud that brings misfortune with him! He pops in to The Red Stallion & all
hell breaks loose within minutes! (And Mary the waitress needs to rethink her career choice if she thinks she won't
be hearing guys in a gay bar talking graphically about sex!) Nice to see the bar is the usual chaotic place.
I think Ellery is going to need to find an available mountaintop in Tibet to get that meditation time in. A fun update.
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 06, 2008, 05:44:58 pm ---....annnnnd here we are! Chapter 22 everyone!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/242048.html
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Wow - that was fast, Louise!
--- Quote from: frantic65 on January 06, 2008, 06:15:30 pm --- (And Mary the waitress needs to rethink her career choice if she thinks she won't
be hearing guys in a gay bar talking graphically about sex!)
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Yeah, Fran, I was thinking the same thing. Her ears and Wayne's mouth are not a good fit! :laugh: It was great to be back at the bar though. I've missed Lauren (and even Wayne!).
Yes, Puerto Rico is sounding better and better for Ellery and his need for relaxation. Colson isn't supposed to act as a bouncer, Ellery is supposed to be meditating - what to do? Uh oh - I'm wondering now if Ellery will make an emergency to call to Jeremy just as he and Nick are looking forward to a Friday night free from the bar?
I agree that was a lot of fun! Thanks!
Marie
souxi:
So how many chapters is this story going to be then Louise; 50? 100? ;) :laugh:
Oh and don,t forget about our boys honeymoon, very important that. ;) ;) :)
louisev:
Well it's as long as it goes, Souxi. I don't see it ending right away...
But I do think that the "vacation" story will be separate! how's that sound ?
souxi:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on January 07, 2008, 04:24:47 pm ---Well it's as long as it goes, Souxi. I don't see it ending right away...
But I do think that the "vacation" story will be separate! how's that sound ?
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Wow this is just the kind of news I like to hear!! Sounds absolutly wonderful to me Louise. Get that publisher ready!! ;) :laugh:
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