Artiste, for your BBM sequel perhaps a sidestory from Jack's POV?? With his thoughts
'Oh la la, a hunk' fits the category quite well!
And Jack's thoughts in general would be fun to listen to - oh, dear, if someone complains that much outloud imagine inside his head. I read a fanfic once that had Ennis bump his head off something and suddenly be able to hear people's thoughts - Jack's was pretty funny at times and at others, romantic and sad.
Yeahh! Everyone's thoughts as opposed to dialogue - let me know what you think.