Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3250580 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2830 on: June 18, 2007, 11:19:37 am »


Jack drove up in his beat up black truck


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2831 on: June 18, 2007, 11:24:13 am »
Jack drove up in his beat up black truck —
a big change in Ennis' luck!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2832 on: June 18, 2007, 11:53:13 am »

Jack drove up in his beat up black truck —
a big change in Ennis' luck!
they shook hands and grinned


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2833 on: June 18, 2007, 12:15:55 pm »
Jack drove up in his beat up black truck —
a big change in Ennis' luck!
they shook hands and grinned
palms joined skin to skin

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2834 on: June 18, 2007, 12:40:53 pm »


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                Jack drove up in his beat up black truck —
                a big change in Ennis' luck!
                they shook hands and grinned
                palms joined skin to skin
                Their fast trip to the Siesta didnt suck



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2835 on: June 18, 2007, 01:35:14 pm »
At the Siesta, Jack & Ennis shared a smoke


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2836 on: June 18, 2007, 02:37:43 pm »
At the campfire, they swapped a "toke."
« Last Edit: June 18, 2007, 04:25:19 pm by TOoP/Bruce »
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2837 on: June 18, 2007, 03:59:43 pm »

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                    At the Siesta, Jack & Ennis shared a smoke   
         
                   
                     At the camfire, they swapped a "toke.

                     They were riled up and Ennis got spent



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2838 on: June 18, 2007, 04:29:15 pm »
At the Siesta, Jack & Ennis shared a smoke     
At the campfire, they swapped a "toke."
They were riled up and Ennis got spent
Then out the tent door Ennis just went
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2839 on: June 18, 2007, 05:30:22 pm »
At the Siesta, Jack & Ennis shared a smoke     
At the campfire, they swapped a "toke."
They were riled up and Ennis got spent
Then out the tent door Ennis went
After giving a final hot stroke