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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3000 on: August 13, 2007, 01:18:44 am »

The elk meat was juicy and tasty
They hung it and dried it; no wasty
Their hunger satisfied and sated
The dinner was much anticipated


         



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3001 on: August 13, 2007, 10:39:23 am »
The elk meat was juicy and tasty
They hung it and dried it; no wasty
Their hunger satisfied and sated
The dinner was much anticipated,
now they retreated to the tent post hasty!
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3002 on: August 13, 2007, 10:46:49 am »
Jack smiled at the memory of he and Ennis at the Siesta motel,
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3003 on: August 13, 2007, 05:37:02 pm »
Jack smiled at the memory of he and Ennis at the Siesta motel,
We've got so many syllables the Limerick God will send us to hell,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3004 on: August 13, 2007, 05:42:35 pm »
Jack smiled at the memory of he and Ennis at the Siesta motel,
We've got so many syllables the Limerick God will send us to hell,
There, he'll feed us just beans

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3005 on: August 13, 2007, 06:46:07 pm »
Might I suggest we begin again with less syllables?  :D My fault.


Jack and Ennis pulled in to the Siesta Motel,

Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3006 on: August 13, 2007, 08:27:01 pm »
Jack and Ennis pulled in to the Siesta Motel,
They wrestled and kissed, and loved very welll
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3007 on: August 16, 2007, 12:17:27 pm »
Jack and Ennis pulled in to the Siesta Motel,
They wrestled and kissed, and loved very well
It was like old times once again


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3008 on: August 16, 2007, 12:33:17 pm »
Jack and Ennis pulled in to the Siesta Motel,
They wrestled and kissed, and loved very well
It was like old times once again
when sheep were sheep, but men were Men!



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3009 on: August 16, 2007, 10:59:06 pm »
Jack and Ennis pulled in to the Siesta Motel,
They wrestled and kissed, and loved very well
It was like old times once again
when sheep were sheep, but men were Men!
They were horny, this you could tell!

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