Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3249522 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6580 on: February 10, 2011, 04:35:06 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Something her dad no doubt was behind

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6581 on: February 10, 2011, 04:39:10 pm »
this one was started too.  Among that last two screw-up.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6582 on: February 11, 2011, 01:55:16 pm »
Seems we've got two unfinished limericks again.

We should finish them both before someone starts a new one.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6583 on: February 11, 2011, 03:15:15 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Something her dad no doubt was behind
Did he have Jack killed?
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6584 on: February 11, 2011, 03:17:07 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Even so she still was very sound of mind
Explaining Jack's death
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6585 on: February 11, 2011, 05:37:18 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Something her dad no doubt was behind
Did he have Jack killed?
LD's dreams fulfilled

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6586 on: February 11, 2011, 05:41:04 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Even so she still was very sound of mind
Explaining Jack's death
with almost no breath

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6587 on: February 14, 2011, 03:59:07 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Something her dad no doubt was behind
Did he have Jack killed?
LD's dreams fulfilled
His ego deflated one day as he dined.
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6588 on: February 14, 2011, 04:05:49 pm »
Lureen fundamentally wasn't so kind
Even so she still was very sound of mind
Explaining Jack's death
with almost no breath
While holding the letter he'd earlier signed.
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6589 on: February 14, 2011, 09:00:40 pm »


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