Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3271935 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5430 on: December 08, 2009, 02:50:46 pm »
Phew!  That one stuck to the prescribed meter more than any in recent memory  :laugh:

He woke up in the tent, alone and cold,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5431 on: December 08, 2009, 03:25:44 pm »
He woke up in the tent, alone and cold
he longed for Jack in his arms to hold

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5432 on: December 08, 2009, 03:38:42 pm »
He woke up in the tent, alone and cold
he longed for Jack in his arms to hold
Walked outside, there Jack stood by the fire

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5433 on: December 08, 2009, 04:12:14 pm »
He woke up in the tent, alone and cold
he longed for Jack in his arms to hold
Walked outside, there Jack stood by the fire
Jack certainly knew how Ennis into action inspire

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5434 on: December 08, 2009, 07:44:29 pm »
He woke up in the tent, alone and cold
he longed for Jack in his arms to hold
Walked outside, there Jack stood by the fire
Jack certainly knew how Ennis into action inspire
Ennis embraced Jack, felt his body against his fold

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5435 on: December 08, 2009, 08:25:16 pm »
We won't ever get tired of our favourite movie
Though Ennis and Jack surely never were groovy

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5436 on: December 09, 2009, 02:34:03 am »

We won't ever get tired of our favourite movie
Though Ennis and Jack surely never were groovy
Good thing we aren´t trying to be trendy

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5437 on: December 09, 2009, 02:09:46 pm »
^^^^^^^^

Hmmm....this one was impossible already the first time we had it!  :o

In the end there will be the problem to find something that rhymes with "movie" again!!   ::)  ;D

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5438 on: December 09, 2009, 11:25:45 pm »
Try the rhyming dictionary:      http://www.rhymer.com/cgi-bin/rhymer2.cgi



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5439 on: December 10, 2009, 03:41:06 am »
Try the rhyming dictionary:      http://www.rhymer.com/cgi-bin/rhymer2.cgi

Yes, and it's the reason I used the word "groovy."  It says there is no other rhyme for "movie."