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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
louisev:
--- Quote from: neatfreak on July 12, 2006, 08:33:48 am ---I'm one whose eyes bugged out just a bit at the new toys; but then, I've had one partner for 35 years, and I'm probably less adventurous (and experienced?) than many of your readers. Although there was a time early on when we tried quite a few tricks, I have to admit I'm getting a real education here. In the context of a loving and fulfilling relationship, just about anything goes. You have been introducing Ennis to a lot of new ideas that he has readily accepted; however, I think it would be implausible for him to feel comfortable if more new things just kept coming at him. Give him (or maybe just me!) time to adjust to one thing before introducing another -- at least a couple of chapters!
Edit: I am also brand-spanking-new to slash fiction, having discovered it after watching BBM. So I'm just a rookie here.
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I did let it slip in chat the other day that the last time Ennis fished around in the toy drawer was going to be about where we stop in the toy department. It wasn't my intent to explore all the new ways and means of getting kinky, but for Ennis to find himself with a man who enjoys a little of the wild side of life and bring out the natural dominance in Ennis's nature. So the "more new things "that will be coming at him will be more on the relationship level than the sex toys.... I am asking about where we have got to for now, because I did get a mite concerned about the readers.
louisev:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on July 12, 2006, 08:34:41 am ---Aren't you the woman who made "skinny the new sexy" Louise? Lauren doesn't have to be a dreamboat, but he is cute....I picture 5'8", brown hair, brown eyes, thin (do we have to go all the way to scrawny?).
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5' 8' probably would do it. But when I get my documents in hand I can look for what I did say about Lauren.
neatfreak:
Louise, I have really enjoyed the play between Ennis and Ellery, and you've handled it beautifully. I'm comfortable with where you've taken Ennis/me on this journey. Your fidelity to Ennis' character makes it easy to believe as he tries new things, both sexually and emotionally. You are staying true to the vision of a healing Ennis. And now he is helping Ellery heal as well. I am loving this.
Bigheart:
--- Quote from: MaineWriter on July 12, 2006, 08:10:21 am ---Oh...you want to see my statue? Here 'tis....
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Heee heee! :D
Bigheart:
Louise! You have an avatar!
Hehehe, didnt want to use any of the sex toys I guess!! LOL ;D ;D - god this grinning little cowboy smilie is really weird and the laughing one! LOL
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