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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 23, 2007, 01:39:59 pm ---Well, you didn't think I was going to skip this, did you? This scene is memorable for many reasons - I can't remember another time when we've seen this particular, er, number pop up on E&E's dance card. I guess we find out why when we read Ellery's last line!
Marie
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E&E's dance card?? Marie, you crack me up!! :laugh:
thanks for the quotes.
Lumière:
I just saw that today is Quiplash's birthday!
I haven't seen him online for ages ..
but if you do read this Quip..
Happy Birthday mate! 8)
MaineWriter:
Good morning, re-readers! Chapters 61-65 today...
http://louisev.livejournal.com/66367.html
From 61, a little bit of early morning humor...
“Nah I’m okay.” The bathroom door opened and Ellery stepped out, wearing that too-brief robe that showed most of his thighs. He opened the door of the bedroom as Junior turned, startled. “Jesus God!” she gasped, and put her hand over her eyes.
“Whoops, ‘scuse me, “ Ellery said with an embarrassed smile, and closed the bedroom door.
“What’s wrong, darlin?” Ennis asked, frowning, and poked his head out into the hall.
“Nothin... it’s okay,” she murmured, blushing wildly, and retreated to the sofa to start folding up the blankets and sheets.
“Dammit,” he muttered, stirring the eggs in the pan.
Ellery came out several minutes later, hair combed back wet, in a black t-shirt and denim jeans. “Smells good,” he said cheerfully, leaning in through the kitchen doorway. Junior clutched her robe to her neck, and bent to get some clothes out of her overnight bag.
“S’cuse me, can I go in the bathroom now?”
“Sure Alma, sorry about dashin out there like that.”
“Just wasn’t... wasn’t expectin ...” she fled into the bathroom wordlessly.
“Jesus Christ Ellery.”
“I haven’t got a longer robe. I’m a former bachelor, remember?”
“Still... ya might a dressed in the bathroom.”
“You didn’t.”
“She’s used ta me, besides, I put a towel on, I didn’t prance around in a little nightdress,” Ennis muttered.
“I won’t do it again, okay?”
“Damn straight ya won’t do it again.”
“Ennis, yer bein irritatin.”
“An yer bein insensitive. She is a young girl.”
Ellery dropped his voice, but his tone was heated. “She’s a married woman. All she got was a look at my legs. She’s seen legs before.”
“She’s havin a bad time with her husban so she don’t need no distraction.”
Ellery blinked twice slowly, and then smiled. “I swear ta god Ennis, you come up with the strangest ways a bein jealous.”
MaineWriter:
From Chapter 62:
“Hey.”
“Hey Daddy. I’m sorry I told ya ta shut up.”
“I’m sorry I called ya a filly in heat.”
She looked up shyly. “Did ya mean it?”
Ennis sat down next to her on the sofa. “I never lived with a man before, Junior... I ... I don’t know, I just know when anybody looks at Ellery an I catch em lookin it gets me riled up an I see red. I guess that was out a line.”
“An I guess if I am gonna come cryin ta you I should expect ya ta start askin questions. An no, things a been all right in the love department, an that is about the only thing that is workin right.”
“Fair enough,” Ennis said.
“So you got... jealous a me findin em handsome Daddy? Really?”
“I’m a real jealous guy, darlin,” he said.
“Funny, I never seen you act that way with Momma when was little. An men used ta look at er all the time.”
He smiled faintly. “Junior, you hit the nail on the head. See... I didn’t feel that way about yer momma.”
“Oh... yeah...” she said, her voice dropping. “I see.”
“When someone is lookin at the man I want... it’s ... it’s different.”
“I understand. Sometimes me an Curt go to the church social an there is this Gillian Summers always comes flouncin over an hi an how are you an can I dance with yer husband and she is swayin her hips an it just makes me see red.”
He nodded. “Then you know exactly what I’m talkin about.
L
MaineWriter:
From chapter 65....another famous encounter!
“Hey... we got a second night ta get through, but we got a little while fer some cuddlin an fondlin while she’s out on her walk.”
Ennis swallowed a gulp of coffee. “That’s true. C’mere.”
Ellery stood up and walked over to Ennis’ side of the table, and Ennis, predictably, opened his belt and unzipped him. “I miss doin this just any ol time.”
“Oh sweetheart, you like bein dirty don’t ya?”
“Yeah well... yeah...” he slipped his fingers into Ellery’s fly and pushed down the front of his drawers, gripping his cock, then tilted his head up. “You like that, when I grab ya?”
“Uhhhh huh...”
Ennis stood up, keeping Ellery’s cock firmly in hand as it stiffened, stroking him slightly as he moved closer, then smothered his mouth with a passionate kiss, his other hand pulling Ellery’s chest against his, thrusting his tongue in his mouth. Ellery shuddered with pleasure, feeling the stiff heat of Ennis’s erection against his hip as Ennis thrust his tongue deep in his mouth, working his cock roughly with his hand, then pushing him against the side of the house. Ellery’s arms came around his back, sliding down over his ass and kneading his cheeks with his long fingers.
Junior, had started down the road, turned back as a large thunderhead cast the early evening into shadow, and she came around the side of the house to join Ennis and Ellery, stopping dead as she saw her father pressing Ellery up against the house in a passionate embrace. She stared for a long moment, in a confused fascination, taking in the position of Ennis’s hand moving between them, Ellery’s fingers digging into his ass, the faint moans that escaped their locked mouths, stepped back down the stairs, and at last looked away, breathless.
Neither of the men, their ears filled only with the sound of their muffled moans and labored breathing, heard Junior’s light step on the patio, or her retreat, when they finally broke the kiss. “Can’t wait ta get you alone, an show ya my surprise, boy,” Ennis said, his voice low and urgent in Ellery’s ear, still stroking his erection.
“What is it?” Ellery responded, his breaths a series of short pants against Ennis’s neck.
“Gonna tie ya up, put that vibrator inside ya this time, turn in on high an give ya a paddlin.”
“Oh, Ennis...” Ellery sighed. “You been thinkin again.”
“You bet.”
“Now we just got ta think a what ta do right now,” Ellery moaned softly, his hips rolling as he thrust up into Ennis’s hand.
“We’re gonna make you make a mess in yer pants is what we’re gonna do,” Ennis growled, brushing his lips against Ellery’s neck and sucking, tightening his fingers on his cock as he pumped him.... “yer gonna come fer Mr. Coyote or he’ll give ya a bite.”
Ellery whimpered, opening his eyes to scan around them, but his body was largely blocked by Ennis’s, the yard empty but for a few hopping brown birds and a bright blue hummingbird sucking at the water feeder, and he surrendered to the dominance of Ennis’s hand and the scrape of his teeth along the base of his neck, fixing on his shoulder, and he nipped hard as his hand pumped him, the nip causing a spasm of pleasure to tip Ellery over the edge, causing him to spurt into the palm of Ennis’s hand. He moaned softly as he came, his body quivering with pleasure, and Ennis relaxed his hand, gathering as much of his semen as he could and stepping back a pace, holding his wet palm to Ellery’s mouth while he tucked his cock back into his drawers. Ellery gave him a heavy-lidded smile as he licked the warm liquid out of Ennis's hand.
Ennis nodded, dropping his hand once Ellery had licked it clean, and zipped him up, buckling his belt. “Try not ta look too satisfied, boy...” he warned softly, giving him another rough kiss, his tongue lapping the salty taste from Ellery’s lips.
“I’ll try,” he replied with a mischievous grin. “What about you?”
“You can suck me off when we go ta bed.”
“Can I use some fingers?”
Ennis nodded, saying nothing, his face flushed with desire, and as he moved to sit back at the table, he adjusted himself. “Better settle down now. Want another coffee?”
L
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