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Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
Lumière:
--- Quote from: louisev on July 09, 2006, 02:34:17 pm ---Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/68865.html "Chapter 71: Need"
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Wow! More chapters! :D
louisev:
did you catch up yet Lucise?
You should stop by the chat and meet some of the chatters!
louisev:
Update to "A Second Chance"
http://louisev.livejournal.com/69133.html "Chapter 72: Hangover"
JennyC:
SPOILER.....
The last two chapters were great! Louise you delivered what you said early about this book, that Ellery has some of him own baggage to deal with. Ellery sure took the meeting with Beagle really hard. Its interesting to see the always so confident Ellerys vulnerable side. Its time for Ennis to take on the nurturer role.
And, another chapter!
neatfreak:
SPOILER ALERT
Wow, Louise. These past few chapters have been powerful. For the first time, I feel like I really know what's going on in Ellery's head. And the relationship between the boys is becoming solid -- talking about a future together! No more worries about Ennis' fears, just the knowledge that they will deal with them together as needed. And what a wonderful thing for Ennis to be the nurturer. Each man has a small turn at the other's role: Ellery taking charge -- briefly -- in the bedroom; Ennis taking charge this time of their emotional well-being. I really enjoy the TLC from Wes and Edna, too. You are on a roll!
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