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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 03, 2009, 09:43:19 pm ---And just in time for the weekend,
Chapter 32:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/296383.html
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..and he realized – half of this is really happening, and half of it is in my mind. And I can’t tell which half is which. But Colson’s voice was the same, but rougher, more immediate, more raw and present to him...
Aw, Ellery is fighing his way back to Colson - and out of both his coma and his "amnesia." But will he solve the mystery of Emilio before he comes to, and how much of his delusions will he remember? How maddening it would be to try and open your eyes and be unable to. Aside from the blow to his head, all of his emotional turmoil is enough to give anyone a crushing headache!
louisev:
And onward into Crime Scene Investigation!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/296502.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 04, 2009, 04:11:33 pm ---And onward into Crime Scene Investigation!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/296502.html
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I don't think I could love Joe more. :) I'm impressed with how artful he is with his pragmatism. Joe's idea for the one-man "crime scene unit" is inspired, and Jeremy certainly does seem to fit the bill. LOL at "Larry and Curly." Jeremy probably does feel like banging some heads together! I loved all the dialogue. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
I spent most of the weekend watching the Lord of the Rings extended edition and it took, I don't know, 12 hours altogether I think! I'll be back at work in Tourmaline as soon as possible, I promise!
louisev:
Okay, onward and upward!
Chapter 34:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/296847.html
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