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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 06, 2009, 10:37:23 pm ---Okay, onward and upward!
Chapter 34:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/296847.html
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Aw, Ellery is so loved and treasured by his husband, family and friends.
I imagine "Emilio" is not that unusual of a name in their parts? I understand Wes's excitement at Ellery's utterance, but I hope he isn't jumping the gun and sending the department off on a wild goose chase. But then again, there has to be some reason that name is so important to Ellery - but what reason? I love how you keep them - and us - guessing! Fantastic story, Louise!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on April 07, 2009, 12:14:12 pm ---SPOILERS
Aw, Ellery is so loved and treasured by his husband, family and friends.
I imagine "Emilio" is not that unusual of a name in their parts? I understand Wes's excitement at Ellery's utterance, but I hope he isn't jumping the gun and sending the department off on a wild goose chase. But then again, there has to be some reason that name is so important to Ellery - but what reason? I love how you keep them - and us - guessing! Fantastic story, Louise!
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well of COURSE he's sending them on a wild goose chase! Every great leader has to make a bonehead move when he's not thinking straight, right?
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 07, 2009, 01:18:44 pm ---well of COURSE he's sending them on a wild goose chase! Every great leader has to make a bonehead move when he's not thinking straight, right?
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:laugh: :laugh: Yeah, it looked like that, but I was trying to be gentle on Wes, being he's so wrapped up with Ellery and all. But, as you point out - he's not thinking straight, so we'll give him a pass on this bonehead move - but I'm not so sure the Fearless Leader will give himself a pass!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on April 07, 2009, 01:30:55 pm --- :laugh: :laugh: Yeah, it looked like that, but I was trying to be gentle on Wes, being he's so wrapped up with Ellery and all. But, as you point out - he's not thinking straight, so we'll give him a pass on this bonehead move - but I'm not so sure the Fearless Leader will give himself a pass!
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Heheheh but on the other hand, if your chief deputy wakes up and seems to answer a question "who hit you over the head" and comes up with a name... it would be a mistake not to follow it up, right?
louisev:
and now, chapter 35!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/297166.html
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