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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
louisev:
and back at Memorial Hospital:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/300065.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 22, 2009, 05:26:05 pm ---yes, Fabienne that is an interesting phenomenon. But if Joe is going to get out of his comfortable zone of being just the scheduling and HR guy and has to do the dirty work of management, who is he going to emulate?
And same for Dupree.
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Oh absolutely. Wes has taught them well. I had to laugh at the back and forth between Joe and Jeremy. It all sounded very familiar.
*Off the read the new chapter* :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 22, 2009, 11:08:46 pm ---and back at Memorial Hospital:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/300065.html
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SPOILERS
Well, no matter what, Ellery is always Ellery...
demanding and direct: “I want ta see Colson. Colson Grey. Tall, nice lookin. You know which one he is.”
vulnerable: What was he going to tell Wes? And how was Colson going to forgive him for belatedly messing up his career this way?
pragmatic: He knew when he extracted that promise from Caulfield that he was not going to be able to keep this under wraps.
incorrigible: Did ya lie like I said so ya can get me sprung out a here?”
sensitive: I love you, boy. I am not gonna die an leave ya. Remember what I said about leavin my job. If ya want me ta do it ya can have me full time.”
loving: “I mean it. Anythin ya want. Tell me what ya want an I’ll do it.”
horny: Ohhh... I wish I was well an we could...”
funny: “As long as he don’t love me like you do that’s fine with me. Edna bring any snacks? The food here sucks an I’m starved.”
Little wonder all roads lead right to him! And Edna's going to be thrilled - once Colson tells her Ellery is hungry she'll start cooking as well as baking. I see fried chicken and biscuits in their future! :) This was wonderful. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
I just love coming on here and seeing all these comments - it's what keeps me writing!
One of the things that makes it easy for me to write Ellery, is I have really gotten to know him in all of his little quirks, and after the trip to California, I knew I wanted to get deeper into the psychology of his relationship with Colson and the stresses of being him and how his life impacts his commitment to being a couple, which he really has not ever had to go the distance with before. Colson broke out of his closeted shell, and now Ellery is challenged once again with having to reveal himself and maintain his integrity under fire, and that means having to be honest with his man.
louisev:
and chapter 48!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/300518.html
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