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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on April 30, 2009, 11:18:28 pm ---...and chapter 56!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/302396.html
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Wow, this was a truly heartwarming chapter, despite all the worrying that's going on too.
“Edna’s tryin ta say in her oh-so-subtle way that she knows we both play second fiddle ta you in Ellery’s heart, so don’t take us for ignorant old fuddy-duddies, Colson,” Wes grumbled, but then gave Colson a big smile. “He is lucky to have ya, a yer lucky ta have him. We’re all lucky ta have em.”
*sigh* All the words that Colson needs to hear right now. Gotta love Wes and Edna.
And LOL at Colson's 'tying to the bed' comment! :laugh: Poor Edna. ;D
A great chapter Louise. Thanks! :)
louisev:
I went back and found a bunch of typos in it too! I must have been writing too fast!
Anyhew, here is chapter 58!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/302895.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 03, 2009, 06:55:21 pm ---I went back and found a bunch of typos in it too! I must have been writing too fast!
Anyhew, here is chapter 58!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/302895.html
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SPOILERS
Love the dialogue!!! You don't write their words, you channel them, and I don't read them, I hear them. Poor boys. On top of all the worry, wondering what Ellery is keeping from him is eating at Colson something awful. And on top of all the pain, wondering what the hell is real and what is imagined is eating at Ellery something awful. Hope they both can put their minds to rest soon so they can get to some grabbin and makin kissy faces! Then we'll know for sure everything's as it should be! :laugh: Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
Hehehehe, the things I like writing best are those moments alone between Colson and Ellery. They are heartbroken when they are apart and keeping things from one another, but it sure makes for good drama, don't it?
I have to do a bit more housework today (it's my week) and I may feel inspired to get to the next chapter by then! whoo hoo! thanks for the comments, I thrive on them!!
louisev:
Bonus chapter 58!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/303115.html
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