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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
Two chapters to read at once - yay!
SPOILERS
Well, I can certainly understand Mel's reaction and I know in his heart Wes does, too. But Wes is a papa bear when it comes to Ellery. I'm hoping Joe is right and there is someone down in Tuscon with a need to purge their conscience. And maybe that person (or Mabel?) can help clear the confusion of the TWX picture.
And back at the Cantrell/Grey household - He was relieved to have Ellery all to himself once more.
Aww, how very Colson. LOL at the "lumpy head" :laugh: Colson does love his Rapunzel's hair, and I have to say that Ellery with a military cut is all kinds of wrong!
I think it's sweet that the girls made a quiche - with meat! - and want to bring it over. As long as Wes and Edna are going to be there, the girls might as well be, too. Sounds like family dinner night and Colson and Ellery's. Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
And here is chapter 73!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/306851.html#cutid1
because everybody needs a little tenderness!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on May 17, 2009, 10:34:46 pm ---And here is chapter 73!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/306851.html#cutid1
because everybody needs a little tenderness!
--- End quote ---
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Lovely.
..gaze of tender sympathy..
Aww...that and the "I love you's" - along with the relief of telling Colson - are the best medicine. Hope the family dinner isn't too much for him! Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
SPOILERISH
One of the things I was trying to illustrate in the Ellery-POV area is that one of the side-effects of head injury is emotional volatility. Not that he isn't emotional volatile at other times, but things like depression, crying, and extreme emotional sensitivity are also part of the short-term side-effects of a head trauma, so the Ellery we've got right now is definitely not our "usual hard-headed Ellery."
louisev:
and here is Chapter 74!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/306980.html
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