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louisev:
And here is Chapter 20!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/293241.html

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louisev on March 23, 2009, 06:50:28 pm ---And here is Chapter 20!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/293241.html

--- End quote ---


Oh, dear, it never rains but it pours right? And now Esteban's in trouble too...and Nick's mad, Jeremy's upset....

Thank God Joe's stepping up to the plate, and trying to get everyone to focus on the job at hand.

And now the girls are headed to the hospital as well. The nurses better brace themselves!

Thanks Louise.  :)

mariez:
SPOILERS






--- Quote from: belbbmfan on March 24, 2009, 02:57:37 am ---
Oh, dear, it never rains but it pours right? And now Esteban's in trouble too...and Nick's mad, Jeremy's upset....

Thank God Joe's stepping up to the plate, and trying to get everyone to focus on the job at hand.

And now the girls are headed to the hospital as well. The nurses better brace themselves!

Thanks Louise.  :)

--- End quote ---

Yep, Joe is worth his ample weight in gold.  I wonder if Wes did bring Esteban back too soon?  A lot of unresolved business there ....

And I know Colson loves his girls, but I honestly don't see how their presence can do anything but make matters more tense.   :-\  Maybe Edna can rein them in a bit. 

I hope Deputy Legs is okay.

That's so Nick!  LOL.   It's so interesting to see, not just how many lives are affected by one man, but how deeply they're affected! 

louisev:
And here's chapter 21:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/293487.html

belbbmfan:

--- Quote from: louisev on March 24, 2009, 01:44:07 pm ---And here's chapter 21:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/293487.html

--- End quote ---

Wow! This is very intense Louise.

I'm so glad Ellery knew who Colson was. That 'sweetheart' was soooo good.


But now what?  :-\


Thanks for all the quick updates! :)

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