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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 25, 2009, 12:49:37 pm ---
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However, you wouldn't want to spoil a plot point for me now would you Marie?
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Ha! I knew the eye color talk wasn't thrown in there for nothin'! You've always got something up your sleeve, Louise! And in this story, I'd say both sleeves at least! :laugh:
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 25, 2009, 12:59:43 pm ---Ha! I knew the eye color talk wasn't thrown in there for nothin'! You've always got something up your sleeve, Louise! And in this story, I'd say both sleeves at least! :laugh:
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well you know, I start out writing a stream-of-consciousness deep psychological insight story and end up writing another mystery and detective thing. I guess I just can't help it!
louisev:
okay for all you people who don't want the plot spoiled for you ahead of time!!!
here's chapter 23!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/293923.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 25, 2009, 06:46:44 pm ---okay for all you people who don't want the plot spoiled for you ahead of time!!!
here's chapter 23!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/293923.html
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SPOILERS
And I thought my heart was breaking for Colson before. :'( Oh, dear. I can't even imagine what that would be like. And what a god-awful frightening feeling for Ellery to have as well. To have a chunk of your life just disappear on you. I figured Ellery had gone into a coma, but I know next to nothing about this kind of stuff, and now it appears that his short-term memory is suffering along with his amnesia b/c Colson's been coming into his room for a week and it looks like they're going through some kind of Groundhog Day. :-\
I don't have to tell you that you've got us on the edge of our seats here, Louise! Terrific storytelling.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 25, 2009, 08:49:03 pm ---
SPOILERS
And I thought my heart was breaking for Colson before. :'( Oh, dear. I can't even imagine what that would be like. And what a god-awful frightening feeling for Ellery to have as well. To have a chunk of your life just disappear on you. I figured Ellery had gone into a coma, but I know next to nothing about this kind of stuff, and now it appears that his short-term memory is suffering along with his amnesia b/c Colson's been coming into his room for a week and it looks like they're going through some kind of Groundhog Day. :-\
I don't have to tell you that you've got us on the edge of our seats here, Louise! Terrific storytelling.
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well I sure hope I gave everybody enough buildup!! To think I was originally going to start the story HERE... no no that wouldn't do at all. It would just be too much!
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