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The Persistence of Memory: New Greenlea Tale
CarolK1943:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 25, 2009, 09:06:43 pm ---well I sure hope I gave everybody enough buildup!! To think I was originally going to start the story HERE... no no that wouldn't do at all. It would just be too much!
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Strangely enough I would have liked that as a starting point - as long as you immediately went back and explained everything. I just started reading this story a couple of days ago and as usual I'm completely sucked in. Great story, Louise! You've got me completely hooked.
Carol
louisev:
--- Quote from: CarolK1943 on March 25, 2009, 10:12:35 pm ---
Strangely enough I would have liked that as a starting point - as long as you immediately went back and explained everything. I just started reading this story a couple of days ago and as usual I'm completely sucked in. Great story, Louise! You've got me completely hooked.
Carol
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I thought about it and considered the pros and cons before I decided to do it this way. Anyway... onward and upward!
Chapter 24
http://louisev.livejournal.com/294399.html
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 25, 2009, 10:43:28 pm ---I thought about it and considered the pros and cons before I decided to do it this way. Anyway... onward and upward!
Chapter 24
http://louisev.livejournal.com/294399.html
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SPOILER
Gosh, Louise, I'm taking deep breaths here.
I'm ready for some positive news about Ellery now. :-\ But, like Colson, I guess I'm just going to have to be patient.
Like Marie said, fantastic storytelling. :)
CarolK1943:
--- Quote from: louisev on March 25, 2009, 10:43:28 pm ---I thought about it and considered the pros and cons before I decided to do it this way. Anyway... onward and upward!
Chapter 24
http://louisev.livejournal.com/294399.html
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Now I'm completely lost. Was chap 23 a figment of Ellery's coma?
Carol
louisev:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on March 26, 2009, 02:16:42 am ---
SPOILER
Gosh, Louise, I'm taking deep breaths here.
I'm ready for some positive news about Ellery now. :-\ But, like Colson, I guess I'm just going to have to be patient.
Like Marie said, fantastic storytelling. :)
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I guess all I can do is keep on writing and all you readers just have ta hold on tight!
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