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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on November 29, 2009, 06:44:49 pm ---SPOILERS
Aw, you're a trouper, Louise - and it's greatly appreciated. This was wonderful. I really enjoyed getting a chance to meet Doris and officer-in-training Jeremiah.
“Ya mean he ain’t ever gonna do that? I had such high hopes,” she added. “Our anniversary’s the tenth. Yer off a week.”
:laugh: She's the perfect match for Joe! Thanks, Louise!
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bwah! Yes, I had some delay in writing that because I couldn't see Joe in the doghouse with his lovely and beloved spouse simply over a missed date, when lives hung in the balance. There had to be a third force at work!
louisev:
the next chapter is under construction AT THIS HOUR! and I have a luxurious 14 hours of uninterrupted brain-time ahead of me!
eta: and as soon as I say that I start working on a guide for the book so that I can keep track of the action... *eyeroll*
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 04, 2009, 08:41:38 pm ---the next chapter is under construction AT THIS HOUR! and I have a luxurious 14 hours of uninterrupted brain-time ahead of me!
eta: and as soon as I say that I start working on a guide for the book so that I can keep track of the action... *eyeroll*
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Thanks for the heads up, Louise! As for the action - well, you haven't given yourself an easy task, but then you never do! LOL. I hope to carve out some time this weekend to start on "Empire"!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on December 05, 2009, 09:43:53 am ---Thanks for the heads up, Louise! As for the action - well, you haven't given yourself an easy task, but then you never do! LOL. I hope to carve out some time this weekend to start on "Empire"!
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I had to do some referencing because this is the most complicated plot entanglement I've pulled thus far.
and here are the results I got to last night which I needed to pull together before I could forge ahead, due to plot hooks I had to reconnect:
“Agents” Chapter Guide
1. Joe and Family
2. Ellery and Colson
3. Nick and Jeremy and Pam
4. Paula and Henry
5. Joe, Wes, Carol, Leslie, Murdoch, Reynolds at the station
6. Colson and Edna/Colson phoning Katie Ann in Prescott
7. Nick and Jeremy
8. Carol, Stevens, Joe, Wes Brown
9. Edna, Ellery
10. Joe in Tucson, Kevin Railly (head of Vice)
11. Wes and Henry Caulfield
12. Sanchez, Esteban, Carol, Stevens at the station
13. Pam on the phone with Katie, Laura, Edna and Ellery.
14. Colson, Wes, Gus Hume and his assistant Alex
15. Joe, Mike Sansone (Tucson Vice), Railly, Coke (?) Carol on the phone
16. Katie, Laura, Ellery on the phone
17. Edna and Ellery, Dr. Sampson
18. Carol, Stevens, Reynolds, Joe, Esteban
19. Wes, Colson, Hume and Alex
20. Henry Caulfield, Edna, Ellery,
21. Carol, Joe, Drew, Stevens, Reynolds, Leslie
22. Nick and Jeremy, Pam
23. Sanchez, Reynolds, Carol on the radio, Hezekiah Waldrop, Millicent Godfrey, Mrs. Waldrop, other driver (unnamed), ambulance driver
24. Henry, Raymond Boudreau (MD), Edna, Wes, Henry Caulfield, Colson
25. Katie Ann Wilson, Sam McElhaney, Scott McElhaney
26. Carol, Joe, Stevens, Henry Caulfield, Reynolds, Drew Farnsworth
27. Ellery, Boudreau, Edna, Caulfield, Colson, Katie Ann on the phone
28. Taylor, Esteban, Carol on the radio
29. Pam, Katie
30. Henry Caulfield, Sanchez, Carol, Millicent Godfrey, Drew Farnsworth, Reynolds
31. Ellery, Boudreau, Wes, Sampson (on the phone), Colson
32. Carol, Wes, Joe,
33. Jeeves, Noel Creston, Lauren, Wayne, Katie Ann, Gene Autry, Ellery on the phone
34. Colson, Ellery, Edna
35. Wes, Reynolds, Joe
36. Lewis Stevens, Ned Flaherty, Willard Friend, Evelyn Friend (on the phone)
37. Joe, Doris, Jeremiah
and now... on to the story! (LOL)
plot complication? what plot complication?
louisev:
okay, after massive delay...
chapter 38! *updated*
I think things got out of sequence earlier on and I'll straighten those numbers out a bit later on after I do a couple of errands:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/332276.html#cutid1
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