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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on December 05, 2009, 04:51:52 pm ---I had to do some referencing because this is the most complicated plot entanglement I've pulled thus far.
and here are the results I got to last night which I needed to pull together before I could forge ahead, due to plot hooks I had to reconnect:
“Agents” Chapter Guide
1. Joe and Family
2. Ellery and Colson
3. Nick and Jeremy and Pam
4. Paula and Henry
5. Joe, Wes, Carol, Leslie, Murdoch, Reynolds at the station
6. Colson and Edna/Colson phoning Katie Ann in Prescott
7. Nick and Jeremy
8. Carol, Stevens, Joe, Wes Brown
9. Edna, Ellery
10. Joe in Tucson, Kevin Railly (head of Vice)
11. Wes and Henry Caulfield
12. Sanchez, Esteban, Carol, Stevens at the station
13. Pam on the phone with Katie, Laura, Edna and Ellery.
14. Colson, Wes, Gus Hume and his assistant Alex
15. Joe, Mike Sansone (Tucson Vice), Railly, Coke (?) Carol on the phone
16. Katie, Laura, Ellery on the phone
17. Edna and Ellery, Dr. Sampson
18. Carol, Stevens, Reynolds, Joe, Esteban
19. Wes, Colson, Hume and Alex
20. Henry Caulfield, Edna, Ellery,
21. Carol, Joe, Drew, Stevens, Reynolds, Leslie
22. Nick and Jeremy, Pam
23. Sanchez, Reynolds, Carol on the radio, Hezekiah Waldrop, Millicent Godfrey, Mrs. Waldrop, other driver (unnamed), ambulance driver
24. Henry, Raymond Boudreau (MD), Edna, Wes, Henry Caulfield, Colson
25. Katie Ann Wilson, Sam McElhaney, Scott McElhaney
26. Carol, Joe, Stevens, Henry Caulfield, Reynolds, Drew Farnsworth
27. Ellery, Boudreau, Edna, Caulfield, Colson, Katie Ann on the phone
28. Taylor, Esteban, Carol on the radio
29. Pam, Katie
30. Henry Caulfield, Sanchez, Carol, Millicent Godfrey, Drew Farnsworth, Reynolds
31. Carol, Wes, Joe,
32. Jeeves, Noel Creston, Lauren, Wayne, Katie Ann, Gene Autry, Ellery on the phone
33. Colson, Ellery, Edna
34. Wes, Reynolds, Joe
35. Lewis Stevens, Ned Flaherty, Willard Friend, Evelyn Friend (on the phone)
36. Joe, Doris, Jeremiah
and now... on to the story! (LOL)
plot complication? what plot complication?
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Holy Crap, Louise! :laugh: Seeing it all laid out like that makes my head spin!
It was great to visit No. 4! Paula and Henry have a very natural banter that bespeaks an already comfortable relationship - and they make a great team.
“Ellery Cantrell just became a far more puzzling character than he was a few minutes ago,” Henry said.
Henry, you haven't begun to plumb the depths of Ellery Cantrell! :laugh:
louisev:
okay so I figured out the numbering problem - I missed chapter 31 in there.
And yes, plot complications are mind boggling. But I am hoping that I don't need to go back and do a brain dump again! now that I have all of the threads. But I did have to print it out!!!
louisev:
I am getting back to the pile of writing to do... I have not forgotten. I started my new job this week and I just got my diagnosis, and still living in a hotel. This weekend... I will have time, and next week I get two days off!!! so you know what that means!
MORE CHAPTERS!
mariez:
Hey, Louise, thanks for popping in! I've been missing in action a bit myself lately so I'll have to make a point to check out your blog. Yay! for the weekend!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on December 17, 2009, 06:50:52 pm ---Hey, Louise, thanks for popping in! I've been missing in action a bit myself lately so I'll have to make a point to check out your blog. Yay! for the weekend!
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I lucked into a team on this project that works from home/travels on Fridays. So I get to be offsite one day a week, and I am going to use that day wisely! So be prepared for some action sooner rather than later!
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