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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
but I fell over in bed and slept instead.
But I got up later!
As more shit hits more fans.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/333342.html Chapter 43
mariez:
--- Quote from: louisev on January 23, 2010, 08:38:26 am ---but I fell over in bed and slept instead.
But I got up later!
As more shit hits more fans.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/333342.html Chapter 43
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SPOILERS
Holy Shits - we need more fans! And my head was already spinning. Which fire is Wesley supposed to (try to) put out first?!?
You’ll have ta forgive em, his chief deputy’s husband’s twin daughters are killin each other so that takes priority.”
“What?” Flaherty stared at Murdoch, who was transferring the call.
:laugh: Flaherty must think he just walked into the loony bin instead of the sheriff's office!
It was so great to see Ellery, even if we only got to hear his voice. That man has a way with words, but I think these four summed things up perfectly:
Oh for fuck’s sake.
:laugh: At least he has a bit of a heads up to what Colson is going to tell him on the bat phone! Thanks, Louise!
louisev:
Yes I finally got back to Tourmaline. It took a blizzard to do it, but here it is:
Chapter 44:
http://louisev.livejournal.com/333699.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Oh my gosh - Esteban is in really, really bad shape all the way around! I can't imagine how any of this can be resolved w/o serious and permanent consequences.
And, once again, all roads lead to Ellery, don't they? Kudos on such an ambitious tale, Louise. It's truly fascinating. Glad to see you're surviving the blizzard as best you can!
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on February 06, 2010, 03:58:59 pm ---SPOILERS
Oh my gosh - Esteban is in really, really bad shape all the way around! I can't imagine how any of this can be resolved w/o serious and permanent consequences.
And, once again, all roads lead to Ellery, don't they? Kudos on such an ambitious tale, Louise. It's truly fascinating. Glad to see you're surviving the blizzard as best you can!
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oh it gets deeper. In fact... needless to say, this is the turning point story on which a new series turns. In case you hadn't figured that out yet!
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