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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
mariez:
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Well, well, this is an interesting turn of events! You've always got one up your sleeve, don't you, Louise? :laugh:
A tall, lanky, blond policeman in a well-fitted uniform - sounds like just the thing to get Katie Ann's mind off of Detective Sargeant Dupree. This is great! Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on September 10, 2009, 01:04:34 pm ---SPOILERS
Well, well, this is an interesting turn of events! You've always got one up your sleeve, don't you, Louise? :laugh:
A tall, lanky, blond policeman in a well-fitted uniform - sounds like just the thing to get Katie Ann's mind off of Detective Sargeant Dupree. This is great! Thanks, Louise.
--- End quote ---
well it IS the State Police. Actually, this particular McElhaney is historically correct, and I wonder how he's going to feel about being written into a novel...? hee hee.
louisev:
okay i am working on a chapter
louisev:
et voila!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/328006.html Chapter 26
mariez:
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I don't know which is funnier:
"Constipated? I didn’t know jerkin off was good for that ...”
or
“I can’t pee in that bathroom no more now!”
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Oh, good grief. But what's not funny is the foundation of all this absurdity. And with the department stretched beyond its limits as it is. >:(
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