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New Greenlea Tale: Agents of the Law
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on September 14, 2009, 12:36:45 pm ---SPOILERS
I don't know which is funnier:
"Constipated? I didn’t know jerkin off was good for that ...”
or
“I can’t pee in that bathroom no more now!”
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Oh, good grief. But what's not funny is the foundation of all this absurdity. And with the department stretched beyond its limits as it is. >:(
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yep, and do you know where it all stems from? The Grand Unified Theory that would require a detective and a few not-so-religious and very observant folks from out of town to investigate more deeply, which would explain all of the monkey business?
louisev:
finally I eked out time in the evening to write!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/328263.html Chapter 27
mariez:
SPOILERS
Oh, I like Dr. Boudreau very much! He's handling Ellery quite impressively, all things considered. And he specializes in immunity - which ties in very nicely with what Nicky told Jeremy recently about being tested. But poor Ellery, for someone as intelligent as he is and with his law enforcement background, this entire process is all the more difficult.
And poor Colson, too. The situation - or I guess I should say situations - with the girls give him something else to focus on, but certainly add additional stress. And, no, Colson, Ellery wasn't imagining Katie Ann's crisis! I'm really enjoying watching everything fall together. Thanks, Louise.
louisev:
--- Quote from: mariez on September 18, 2009, 12:23:51 pm ---SPOILERS
Oh, I like Dr. Boudreau very much! He's handling Ellery quite impressively, all things considered. And he specializes in immunity - which ties in very nicely with what Nicky told Jeremy recently about being tested. But poor Ellery, for someone as intelligent as he is and with his law enforcement background, this entire process is all the more difficult.
And poor Colson, too. The situation - or I guess I should say situations - with the girls give him something else to focus on, but certainly add additional stress. And, no, Colson, Ellery wasn't imagining Katie Ann's crisis! I'm really enjoying watching everything fall together. Thanks, Louise.
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I got a good night's sleep last night thanks to narcotic pain relief for my knee, and am taking a little nappy poo prior to writing the next chapter!
louisev:
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