Our BetterMost Community > Creative Writer's Corner
Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)
Kazza:
--- Quote from: opinionista on January 19, 2007, 12:25:44 pm ---SPOILER
Now that I am caught up with the reading I have to say that even though I feel bad for Jeeves (solitude is hard), I agree that he should not be invited to the reception. It doesn't matter if he has been buying the house over at the bar. He isn't a friend of Ennis and Ellery. I think the reception is something intimate not a public affair in which every queer in Laramie should be invited just because they happen to be customers of the bar. Besides, he and Jeremy are on bad terms. I don't think he belongs in the reception. Those are my two cents anyway.
--- End quote ---
Oh I agree, he's got no business being there at all. Unless of course Louise invites him along for dramatic effect, for the fireworks! ;D
Karen
Lumière:
I don't know what you all think but I think Wayne should be invited to the wedding reception! :P
He manages to add a little edge and humour to everything, as far as I am concerned anyway ..
I bet Ennis doesn't see it that way, not to mention Pookie .. ;D
mariez:
SPOILER
--- Quote from: louisev on January 19, 2007, 07:54:57 am ---and.... yes, an update.
http://louisev.livejournal.com/203433.html "25. Free Floating Jealousy"
I spent some time thinking and considering, and it would see thinking and considering is a good thing in terms of taking original approaches, and so, a theme chapter to get us back to the point of it all.
--- End quote ---
Yes, Louise, thinking and considering are definitely good things . . . espcially when they lead to such a wonderful chapter - a three-in-one! LOL!
E&E - funny, just saw Ellery mention "free-floating jealousy" in the re-read yesterday, I think - and it still works! If Ellery is playing Ennis like a violin - Ennis is loving it . . . which reminds me, I met an attorney yesterday who insisted, "Please, call me B.J., everyone does." Hmmm....
J&N - Jeremy has such a protective, gentle nature. Nick and he balance each other very well - Nick is so sharp and funny and adventurous -but he has a serious, insightful side, too- and Jeremy helps to bring that out, and Nick helps bring out Jeremy's fun-loving side. Interesting to see Jeremy trying to work out the whole jealousy/relationship thing. (Important information: I woke up this morning thinking - What kind of hat? )
Jeeves & Lance - I do feel sorry for Jeeves, but I feel a little better knowing that Martini Man is waiting in the wings . .
Jealousy is ageless, really.
Thanks so much, Louise!
Marie
magicmountain:
--- Quote from: mariez on January 19, 2007, 06:47:53 pm ---I woke up this morning thinking - What kind of hat? )
--- End quote ---
How about this?
louisev:
Ah hahahahahaha!
You will all probably be rather relieved to know that the storms have all subsided, I got a big chunk of administrivia and interviewing and followups done, sorted socks and various and sundry other things, and should be able to devote some time to writing tomorrow!
Navigation
[0] Message Index
[#] Next page
[*] Previous page
Go to full version